After the successful drug deal with the Peggorinos' Don Tie is now asking Tommy and Tony to go Extort all of the Peggorino rackets,"They wont need them anymore." He told them in his Office. So they were on their way to the first one ... Rose's Flowers ... She was heavily bodyguarded with Peggorino's,... its a damn flower shop,why aren't they out protection Jewelry stored,Pawn shops... Why they protect Rose,theres an extra benefit if you're at her shop over night..if you know what I mean... So Tommy parks in the alley behind Rose's,hoping all the guards are at the Dons funeral. They weren't.It was still armed,full,fucking force... "Ready Tony?" Tony nods. Tommy rolls out into the open and fires three rounds killing four bodyguards...I guess he got lucky. Tony comes out with a tommy gun and fires,killing the rest of them... Tommy was the first to enter,He walked up to Rose and grabbed her by the neck. "You pay Don Tie now,got it sweet cheeks?" Tommy releases his grip. "Yeah,I understand ... why don't you and your friend come to the back with me?"Tommy was sticking to plan,but Tony on the other hand...was looking for some action. Tommy wasn't about to wait around,so he got into the car by himself,when he heard a gun shot.He ran into the back room with his revolver,and he saw Tony,laying in a puddle of blood. He saw Rose,he fired three rounds at her... finally she collapsed. Tommy ran to his fallen comrade,Tony was gone...The bullet hit him in the neck. Tommy heard sirens. "Rest in peace Tony,Rest in piece." He says,nearly crying. Then in a flash,he was out the window,as soon as the police busted in.

The end.

Is it finaly over?

You really should try and be more respectful in the streets,it can cost you your life..don't take this as a threat,trust me,I am not gonna go shooting at anymore I'm no fool.Just giving you a warning,if you catch the wrong person at the wrong time,you could be sleeping with the fishes.

Last time I checked I wasnt being disrespectful I was asking a question. You should take your own advice and watch who your talking to.

Ladies, settle down. There's enough to go around for all of us.

Rourke hands out punch and pie.

*Takes some punch and pie from the half dressed man* Thanks Don Rourke...

*Takes a bite of the pie and a drink of the punch while he watches the two go at it.* So..it kinda seems like a cat fight eh? (Ba dum tch)

Well,of course its finally over if it says the end dont you think?If you don think you were being disrespectful I still do,but since it wasnt meant the way I took it I forgive you.

Why did you not just write all the parts on one thread instead of posting in seperate threads. Look how short this story is, you could just have posted them in the very first thread?