It was dark in the alley,real dark.Jimmy had been waiting for these assholes for about thirty minutes now,where the fuck are they?He thought to himself.He lit up a cigarette and patiently waited.Finally,about twenty minutes later a truck pulled up,finally,some goddamn light in this alley. Five men got out and walked over to Jimmy. "You got the coke Jimmy?"One man asked."Of course I do.Now wheres the money?" Jimmy got out a knife,cut a small slit in the sack of Coke and handed it to his contact to taste it."Really good,you always get the best stuff Jimmy,Now how much?"The man says."125."Jimmy replies. "125,000!?"The man is looking at Jimmy Dumbfounded."Yeah 125,000 you dipshit,wheres the money?"Jimmy is now mad because his contacts were already as late as it is and now they're playing stupid.A second care pulled up."What is this shit!?" Jimmy pulls out his pistol "Who are they?" he asks. "I dunno they're your guys you tell me!" The other man said. "They aren't mine,they aren't yours,who the hell are they?"Jimmy feels like ripping someones head off now. .Three men got out of the vehicle,one of them walked over to the back left door of the car and opened it. A well dressed Italian man stepped out of it,he was smoking a cigar,two of the men walked really close to him."Hey big guy! Yeah you! Who the fuck are you!?"Jimmy questioned as I walked over to him.I finally made it to him and I replied ... "Your worst fucking nightmare." I turned around lit a cigarette and before the punch he threw at me landed,I turned around,grabbed his arm and twisted it. "AHGGG!" Jimmy cried out in pain as he fell to the ground,I motioned for my two bodyguards to pick him up. Jimmys contact tried to get away but my third guy who was waiting by the car grabbed him by the throat and hit him in the nose. "Stay where you're at." He said,with no emotions. My two bodyguards got a hold of Jimmy."I know who you are,I know what you do,your a drug runner,I want in on the action.Got it?" I turn to walk back to my car when I hear him speak. "Fuck you and your fucking bodyguards! You can all burn in hell you sack of shits!" Jimmy bursts out. I turn back around and face him."Did you call me a sack of shit?" I take out my pistol."Yeah I did! FUCK YOU ASS-" BANG. "Ahhhh!! You fucking shot my knee you dickhead!" Jimmy is now sobbing.I walk back to him,grab him by the shoulders and knee him in the stomach as hard as I can. "Listen to me. Listen to me ... You're going to fucking pay me,every Sunday,I expect either 250k,or 50 pounds of Coke got it ass hole?"I take out my knife and put it to his throat. "G--Got it." My bodyguards take his coke and the other mans money and drive away. "J--Jimmy,what just happened?" Jimmys contact asked. "We just got FUCKING ROBBED! Whats your fucking name?" Jimmy asks the buyer."Michael,call me Mike."Mike stutters. "Well nice to fucking meet you Mike,lets go get our fucking stuff back!" Jimmy stands up and gets into the truck Mike arrived in. My boys and I arrived to The Street Kingdom HQ."You guys are dismissed for now,stay here at the compound." I walked into Tie's office. "Don Tie,I just hit up that drug deal,I have 125,000 worth of Coke,and I have 250,000 in cash." Tommy hands Tie the 250k and shoves the Coke into his own bag."I told em I wanted 250k every Sunday,payment can be in Coke or cash,we can split it,75 - 25. You get the bigger cut of course." I nod to Don Tie. "Good job Tommy,Go and sell that coke now,I want you in my office tomorrow at 11:00 AM.Be here we have something to discuss.

To be Continued ...

cant wait for the next part :D

I don't think there will be a next part .. I screwed up on the name haha. I'll try and work on it but the name was supposed to be "Drug Deal Gone Wrong"

And from there I was gonna talk about other drug deals I screwed up...haha

10:15. It was 10:15.I have a meeting wit Don Tie in forty-five minutes.Shit. Probably another drug deal to fuck up. I get out of bed and make my way to the shower. I turn on the radio to hear the news as I Bathe. Something about a bank robbery ... After I get out of the shower I make my way to my dresser. I put on my red button up shirt.My black slacks.Black dress shoes.And a belt. I sit and wait about five minutes until I leave. As I make my way out the door I put on my black coat,black tie,black hat,brim down,and I light a cigarette and make my way to the car.About five minutes passes and I arrive to The Street Kingdom HQ. I make my way to Don Tie's office. "Just on time Tommy." Tie lights a cigar. "You wanted to talk to me?" I pull out my flask and before taking a sip I offer some to Tie. "No thanks. This is the plan Tommy." Tie pauses.I take a big gulp from my flask. "The Boccino's are doing a deal with Barbari's. They're trading 500,000 Cash for a couple of "Diamonds". You're gonna fuck up they're deal. The Barbari's are buying. The Boccino's are supplying. These are just a couple of small time crews,not big enough to even call em a family.You're taking sides with the Boccino's.Snipe of one of the Barbari's from the nearest building.The Barbari's and the Boccino's will be at war in no time.Let them wipe each others sorry asses out.Got it?" Tie puts out his cigarette. "Yeah.I understand.Wheres the sniper rifle at?" I take another gulp from my flask."Its on top of the post office on Broadway.The deal is going on in that alley next to it." I put my flask away,and hit the road.Broadway is about 20 miles down the road from the HQ .. It'll be about five minutes to get there. I arrived to the post office,I go around back and climb up the ladder,I take my place,and I wait. About twenty minutes I see two cars pull up.One has a driver and a man in the back seat.And the other,had a driver and three men with tommy guns. About five minutes after that another car pulls up.four men get out.Two have a 12 gauge shot gun,one has a colt .45 and the other has two suit cases .. most likely the money ... Now I know who's who.I take aim at the Barbari holding the two suit cases.I wait for the two groups to meet up.The man with a colt .45 shakes hands with another man who has no weapon.I wait a few minutes before they exchange. The Barbari starts to hand over the suit case ... BANG ... The Barbari drops dead. The remaining three Barbari's think its a trap.They run behind a car for cover,while the Boccino's are trying to explain that they don't have any men. The Barbari's begin to fire. And the Boccino's have no choice but to fire back.One by one they all dropped dead. There was one remaining Barbari.I don't shoot him because he needs to get back to his crew and tell them the news. My mission is complete.The Barbari's and Boccino's are at war. I go home and call Tie. "Tie I did it.The Barbari's hate the Boccino's." "Good. You're dismissed for now.I'll call you if I need anything.I turn on the radio and listen to the news. "Drug Deal Massacre." The reporter says. I turn off the radio ... That's all I needed to hear. 

Its early in the morning. I wake up to see that druggie I ripped off, Jimmy.   I felt Jimmys Colt .45 press up against my head. "You remember me fuck head?You ripped me off for 125,000 worth of coke you cocksucker!I want it back." His grip got tighter. All I can do is laugh. "You think you can kill me? Hahahahaha! I don't fucking die. Fuck you!" I spin around and punch him in the nose. Jimmy pushes me off of him and fires three shots. BANG ... BANG ... I was hit once in the shoulder ... I laugh some more. "You fucking shot me." I stand my ground. "Yeah! Yeah and I'll do it again if I don't get my money!" I cant help but laugh... now I'm laughing hysterically. "Shoot a man once and you think your a born fucking killer." I start to walk closer to Jimmy "Stay back! Stay back I'll shoot!" BANG ... BANG ... BANG ... All three hit me,on in the chest,another in the right shoulder,and one in the knee. I fall to the ground and he approaches me. "Any last words asshole?" He aims his gun at my head. "Yeah ... Say hi to my father for me ... IN HELL!" I pull out a revolver and send six bullets flying into his head.As he falls to the ground I make my way to the pay Phone outside my door. I call Tie. "Tie ... Some fuckhead woke me up in a deep sleep,he pissed me off so I shot him a couple times ... The police will be here soon ... I can make it out alone but i wont be able to carry out all the coke you have stashed here in my place ... I need help." I light a cigarette. "Ok I'll be there soon." I sit down by the pay Phone and wait for Tie ... suddenly a car pulls up,Tie in the back seat. The man in the front seat,not the driver,the passenger, gets out and starts loading the 200IBs of coke into the vehicle. I get up and slowly make my way to the car I get in the back seat and offer Tie a Cuban Cigar. "No thanks." Tie turns me down. The coke is loaded into the car ... "Lets get the fuck outta here." Tie says. "Wait a minute." I get out of the car and light a Molotov.I throw it through the upstairs window and get back into the car."Now lets get the fuck outta here."

I liked it a lot!Itwas great!But please the next time write in paragraphs,it would be more easy to read.

good read!