I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock. I got up,hopped into the shower,brushed my teeth thoroughly,combed back my hair,put on my three piece suit,and headed for the door,almost forgetting my Fedora.

I hopped into my http://classic-car.y2u.co.uk/Photo_caq/Cl_Ford_Crown_Victoria_1955.jpg and began driving down the street.The area wasn't very nice.Today,I had a job to do. I got called into my Boss' office,"Tommy,I need you to whack some fucker,he's threatening to burn down The Brewery,our family bar,he and his buddies hang out outside http://interbizcomau.melbourneitwebsites.com/images/j0149017.jpg. Let me get a picture of him for ya." The Messiah said."Ah.Here you go."

He handed me http://online-business-systems.smugmug.com/photos/555456950_F4kZx-S.jpg

"That's him on the left.Go do it." So,I got back into my vehicle and began to drive to the targets hangout. When I arrived,the guys knew why I was there,my target took off running,he got into a vehicle and drove off,but his buddy wanted a fight.I beat him with a crowbar and then shot him three times.I missed my target,but I'll get him back.I told The Massiah what happened,he said "Fuhget about it.Do it another time."

So,the next day,I got my morning paper,sat down for a drink.You would never guess what the headline was.

'Gangster beaten to death'

Beneath it was a photo.

http://www.onewal.com/pics/hit-cast.gif

Hopefully my target see's his buddy.He'll know I'm comin' and when I do,there WILL be hell to pay.

I really like what you have done here, showing rather than telling. Interesting :)

Almost poetic almost like a Haiku

Gangster is beaten

lays dying on the pavement

now on the frontpage :)

Today I had to whack my target.The stupid prick was still probably in hiding. I knew where he was hiding though.I got armed with some http://earth911.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/explosives-300x300.jpg and got in my ride.His hangout was on Brooklyn Blvd.

I drove up,he was inside,I saw more than 10 people.I wouldn't be able to take them with my http://www.realguns.com/images/rgraftlvfrrslts.jpg So,I have to use my explosives.I set them up,and everybody starts to run when they see the explosives. I quickly set them up. Run 20 yards away,and in ten seconds,they http://midlifeslices.files.wordpress.com/2009/02/explosion-finger.jpg

I see my target get in his car and drive off. He isn't getting away this time. I hop in my Cadillac and chase him. I see his buddy sticking a http://ctuclan.us/CoD%20Page/tommygun_63.jpg out the window.He begins to fire.My car gets all shot up. I was forced to stop.And the bastards got away again!My car looked like hell. http://www.autocult.com.au/img/gallery/TorqueOmata2632.jpg

When I told my boss what happened. You should have seen his face.

http://www.rivetcity.com/contents/2008/images/Fallout%203%20Mousie%20Tung%20Face%20portrait.jpg

"Damnitt TOMMY!!!"

MarioGambino. gives tommy two thumbs up.i love the way u put pic in ur storry and the end the look on ur bosses face was too funny. Danit Tommy. u need to get that bastard.