In a Dark Foggy Night...

I wake up in the middle of a street, my head hurting like never before but I know it was not from the five bottles of beer I had earlier that day this feeling was worse. As I'm laying their face down trying to remember why the hell I'm in the middle of a street but I cant think straight, I hold my head to realize I'm gushing out blood I look to the side of me I see a puddle of blood. I look to the other side of and I see a dead body he look familiar. I stand up to realize that I was in the middle of a gang war. Now thing are starting to clear up for me, that dead guy next to me was actually some one in my crew. I start to panic but then my best friend approaches me I feel relief and I ask him a question "hey man what the hell is going on" He rises his gun points at my head and shoots. I open my eyes I'm still alive, I look behind me I see another dead body he just saved my life my friend smiles at me and says "glad your still alive not many people get hit in the head with a hammer and live to tell, now get you gun and start shooting we could really use some more fire power to win this war". I jump for cover and now the real war begins.

To Be Continued...

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MarioGambino.smiles as he reads loco's story. very good mate.good stroy line and every thing.and i like how it is short and to the pint.getin hit with a hammer sucks.i can't wait for  part2.

What a very suspense story line,I cant wait for part two.You lucky that you survived...:)

It was a very good story and is actually pretty close to what would happen if you survived getting hit in the head with a hammer

Cant wait for part two