I walked around as lonely as can be

A man with a gun i turn round and see

"What do you want?" He hears me cry

"Nothing." Though I know it's a lie

I'm pushed to the ground like a rag doll

And then he shouts "Come on ya'll"

He pulls out his colt, and load up with shots

I know soon holes there will be lots

He's there about to pull the trigger when

My trusted friend stands over me and through his heart bullets by the ten

Thank you i cry out to him

Without you i may have lost a limb

Its no problem as we all know

Families stick together

OddPanda listens to the poetry reciting closely, with much interest.

Very well spoken sir. I have always been a fan of poetry.

OddPanda applauds the man and his performance.

Very good my friend.

I hope you write more. You have great potential.

Nice, I like it.

sal i like it a lot.very nicely done. and yes family ned to  be there toguh think and tink. so u donlt lose ur limb.or ur life.

This was a great story,can't wait to hear more in the near future mate.

Thank you for the lovely comments, i will be writing more soon