Michael walks out to the crowd and lights a cigarette. He clears his voice.

"Ladies and gentlemen, I would like to tell a little story, that I will spend a few days telling (in order to increase the suspense, mind you.) I, as most of you may or may not know, am a story-teller, it is what I do. I do not claim to be the next Edgar Allan Poe, nor am I a Shakesperian genius. I am sorry if I mispronounce any words," says Michael. "Now, without further ado, I will begin my story."

Thomas de Luca sat in a bar, a lit cigarette between his fingers. A man walked from the manager's office with a beautiful woman at his side. The owner went up and sat across from Thomas.

"Well, Mr. de Luca, I am glad you showed up. I am Dominic Esposito, and I own this fine establishment. You contacted me about my...services?" said the man.

"Yes, sir," said Thomas.

"I assume you don't need to hire one of my ladies for a night, so I am guessing that you are in need of a little money," said Dominic.

"Yeah, I am trying to pay off a loan from the bank. The remaining balance is $5,000, and I need to pay that off in order to get a job from a friend of mine. I figure if I get a private loan, I can pay you off in the time that it takes to pay off the bank loan, and I have the job," explained Thomas.

"Very well, Mr. de Luca. I believe we can work something out."

Sweeney claps.

It's pretty good in my opion. But I wish it would be a lil longer. Will the story be longer on the second part?

Nice story, make it a lil longer but not too long, I hate the really long stories.

Wraith surveys the scene going on, and waits for more to follow. Hopefully, the person getting a loan could pay it back in time.