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| Ace of Spades | Started by: JimmyConway on Oct 25, '09 00:23 |
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Jimmy was going to wreck a little havoc on a man that was messing with the family. He also was addicted to gambling and had some serious debts to pay. Guy was going to be killed sooner or later, so Jimmy took it upon himself to be the one to murder the prick. The prick was playing some blackjack or poker game in the back of a warehouse, and our friend here Jimmy decided this was the perfect opportunity. Once Jimmy found the place, he took out his favorite baseball bat and walked into the back. "Hey you assholes, give me and our little gambling friend here some quiet time. Or maybe I can just murder all of you and be done with it." Jimmy said. Once they were gone, he walked up to the troublemaker. "Some guys up in New York ain't too happy about you and all of your trouble, so now its time to play ball you moron." Jimmy said to the cowering man. "Hey man I don't want no trouble please I'll pay you back." "Shut the hell up, my ears hurt now bitch." Jimmy replied as he swung his bat and knocked the now crying man. Once he was finished with the bastard, Jimmy put the ace of spaces on the mans forehead and walked out. "What can I say, gambling makes a sure death for some people. What better way to symbolize that death then a death card itself?" |
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i like ur stoy jimmy. good stoy line. strainght to the point. and hte death card was a cool tough. very well done man. |
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| Reply by: CrazyWolf at Oct 25, '09 00:55 | |
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Wraith leaned against a nearby wall, watching the kid at work. After the job was done, he tipped forward his hat in approval. "Good work. Just remember, you kill for the sake of the family as a duty, and you do it without hesitation. But don't enjoy it," He leaves to carry on with his work. |
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| Reply by: Wraith at Oct 25, '09 01:22 | |
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The last sentence of the story was brilliant. |
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| Reply by: Geraldine_Castellano at Oct 27, '09 09:19 | |
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