Oct. 25, 1:08 AM, Local Bar...

Tommy sat in the crowded bar,ordering snakebite,after snakebite before he even realized what kind of a dump he was in. When you first walked in,there there were wooden tables,most with a broken leg,and two bar stools at each table,they creaked,some even broke under the fat,drunken bums sitting on top of them.

There was a smell in the air that made Tommy sick to his stomach. "Must be the mix of the booze,sweat,and vomit." Tommy mumbled under his breath. He heard the bartender saying ,"Sir,here's your snakebite." He heard some racket going on in the corner,he turned to see a lady being harassed by some drunk. When he stood up and began to walk over,he could almost make out what they were saying.

Michael,your drunk! Leave me alone!" The girl said. "C'mon,lets go back to my place Nina." The man said. "Hey. The lady said leave her alone. You'd better leave her alone." Tommy said. "Yeah?And what if I don't?" He said. "Then I'll make you." Tommy said. Then he heard the man laugh,and three other men came up behind him. One with brass knuckles,another with a crowbar,and the third cracking his knuckles. Tommy remained calm.

"Boys. This fuck wants to cause problems. He wants to fight. Let's take it out back." He said as he approached Tommy. "Why not right here?" Tommy said as he grabbed the man's arm and flipped him over onto his back. That's when the other three charged Tommy.

The crowbar wielder rushed Tommy,who was standing next to an empty beer bottle,he grabbed it,and cracked it over the mans head. He then used the broken bottle to stab the man with brass knuckles several times until the bottle broke. "C'mon. You and me pal!" The other thug charged Tommy,knocking him over a table. Tommy squirmed around on the ground to realize a piece of wood had broken into and stabbed his rib cage.

"What?Not so tough now are you?" The man said as he charged again. Tommy reacted quicker though,he pulled out the wooden piece and put it through the mans chest. He fell down in pain. The bartender shouted,"You stupid fuck! You ruined my bar,the police will be here to arrest your dumbass!" Tommy ignored her,he reached into his coat pocket to get his keys,they weren't there.

They must have fallen out when he was pushed over the table,he could never find them with all the rubble on the ground where he'd fallen. "Come. Quick,I have a car out back." The women he fought to protect said as she helped him up. They quickly ran out of the back door,with sirens blaring,Tommy hopped into the back seat of the ladies car,and the two took off.

To Be Continued...!

Oct. 25, 2:57 - Nina's car/Tommy's house

"What's your name?" Nina asked. "The names Tommy,it's a pleasure

to fucking meet you,as you can see I'm sort of bleeding to death

here,can we formally meet another time?" Tommy shouted as he winced in

pain. "Jeez. Sorry,I'm -" "Nina,yeah,I know,let's get a move on it!"

Tommy interrupted. "Hospital?" Nina asked. "No,there's an abandoned warehouse on the docks,take me there." Tommy said.

They drove in silence until bullets came flying through the

vehicle windows. "Holy shit!" Nina said. "Must be Michaels' gang." She

said. "Turn up here!" Tommy shouted.

The
car made a sharp turn and crashed into a wall. "FUCK!" Tommy shouted.
"Get the fuck out!" He then said. Tommy got out and  began to limp to a
nearby fire escape. He jumped up and barely grabbed the ladder. "I
can't do that!" Nina shouted. "I got a fuckin open wound with a bunch
of shit in side it,if I can do it,so can you." Tommy kept on climbing.

When he reached the fourth floor to the building,he hopping into
a window. Nina managed to make it up. "We can't go in there!" She said.
"It's my house." Tommy replied.

Tell me that you're not gonna stop at this point.It was great!