Ace crosses his fingers

Jimmy scratches his head in confusion.

Sorry about my lateness it was really hard to decide, there were 4 entries that i had to read over twice to make my mind up..

Every entry was brilliant and if i could afford it i would give you all 2 million i would..

but i finally brought my self to a decision and the winner is...

With his brilliant sarcastic take on the story i really enjoyed it, it was Awesome!

http://mafiareturns.com/comm/thread/74371 - Awesome

Congratulations to you and the money will be sent over to you now.

Everyone else my condolences, I enjoyed everyone of them! Thanks.

PS...

To get another look at each entry...

http://mafiareturns.com/comm/thread/73977/tpass/76ec8652d4efe91b200ab0e4a6c84343

Congratulations Awesome!  Your story gave me a good chuckle, well deserved win!

Awesome takes a bow.

Why, thank you Grassboy. 'Twas an enjoyable contest. I look forward to taking part in any others that you might wish to have us all compete over.

It was a cold wet friday afternoon in aurgust when me and a group of friends where sitting in the local speak easy descusing the job.We was planning for the following day they had everything in place form the driver to the gaurds at the bank in our pockets.So we drank up and went home to sleep.

Finaly the day of the job was here.I awoke in a cold sweat nerves about the job.I splash cold water on my face to try and settle them.Getting dressed I leave my apartment and walk down stairs to meet my good friend`s BlackHand and netqueen.We make are way to the Detroit Bank of Michigan we walk inside our hands are sweeting now. Inside we meet the rest of the crew Grassboy, Marietta, Rourke and stephen-grammanta.We all pull out are guns and I shout this is a robbery nobody move or your dead suddenly the bank assistant trys to hit the alarm.BANG BlackHand blows her away before she gets there.

Netqueen grabs the manager and tells him if he dose not open the volt he will meet the same end.Stephen-grammanta and Grassboy fill up the bags we start on are way to Marietta who is waiting in the Limousine.Suddenly the jaintor attacks Rourke knocking him to the ground they struggle.I see a clear shot and make it killing the janitor.Also hittin a woman in the chest.Feel sick about what have I done I cry i killed her.We hear police car heading our way we all run to the car scrabbling for the door.But the police are already out side they open fire on us when we open the door.Killing netqueen and injuring Stephen-grammanta Grassboy myself and BlackHand.We head back into the bank for cover .We start shooting back then BlackHand spots a back door.We all make a move for thats.When Grassboy his shot in the back and Marietta was arested on the spot.BlackHand and my self got away with $10,000,000.Reading the paper the following morning it was all over the news.Listing victims and a interviews from a woman that was shot but recovering in hosptail.Sitting back I start to plan the next job and what to spend the money on from this one.

its too late buddy

Congratulations Awesome, you deserved to win, mine was rubbish compared to yours :P