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The Philadelphian Butcher Part 4 | Started by: Auset on Nov 01, '09 05:58 |
Drugs are bad; I had to taste its rotten filth the hard way, Forgive me father, for I have sinned! Revenge is not the way, it only relieves the pain for a Thank you father. Standing over the dead body of the drug dealer's son, I A note was left at the bedside table, it read: I am sorry for what I've done! All covered with blood, I snatched it, and ripped it apart. I walked out, Just across the street from were I was The search began, and it never stopped until, one of my You have crossed the line Her eyes turned red, and started shaking right before she What the hell are you talking about? You really think I would Holding a glass of scotch in his hand and a cigar in the other, |
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its like , its always rainin out there as the things happenin in this story .. and i really love this feeling , cool read .. o/ |
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Reply by: Fabrizio_Senzafine at Nov 01, '09 06:12 | |
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The drama! The intrigue! What happens in Part 5? Please tell me it involves amnesia and someone faking their own death. |
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Reply by: Vito_T at Nov 01, '09 06:15 | |
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Very dramatic...can't wait to read part five.Im anxious:) |
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Reply by: Diddy at Nov 01, '09 08:02 | |
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Arsenal leans up a nearby phone booth smoking a cigarette as Auset starts his story.. After a few sentences, Arsenal begins to move closer to the narrator.. He gets more and more captivated by the story when suddenly, Auset lights his cigar and stops talking... What? It can't end here..! What happened to him?? Oh well guess I'll have to wait for part 5 like everyone else.. Nicely done Auset! |
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Reply by: Arsenal at Nov 01, '09 08:37 | |
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The susspence keeps me needing more, Great work Auset |
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Reply by: Mad-Frank at Nov 01, '09 10:54 | |
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I love it Auset, can't wait for part 5 ! |
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Reply by: Zaza at Nov 07, '09 08:32 | |
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