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| Being a man! | Started by: KINGZEUS on Nov 02, '09 16:04 |
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Leaves change the rivers freeze and life to a brand new boy. Years pass the tide turns moneys hard be a man. Night has set in the time is near a man Im soon to be. People die friends hate the world suffers and lifes not great. Voice trembles hands shake how can I help you I said to the man. Confused with doubt turned outside in under the sun it all sounds great. Pressure pursues doubt thickens what in society do I have to lose. Lifes hard societys backwards patriots to this nation still cowards. Good means bad bad mean good a snitch I am not. Old gets older young never dies the same decision I would make. |
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that was cool KINGZEUS one of a kind. ur a great writer. that sums up hte true like of a true mafioso very well done. |
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| Reply by: CrazyWolf at Nov 03, '09 09:14 | |
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Thank you very much crazywolf! |
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| Reply by: KINGZEUS at Nov 03, '09 10:27 | |
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KINGZEUS |
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| Reply by: Starshine at Nov 03, '09 10:41 | |
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Kingzeus, Wow what an amazing writer you are. It was very enjoyable to read, and brings real life issue into prospective. |
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| Reply by: Bettymofo at Nov 03, '09 10:43 | |
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Kingzeus... no tears in my eyes, sorry... but damn good story my friend. Keep up the good work, awesome work actualy. |
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| Reply by: Sneakyrat_ at Nov 03, '09 15:57 | |
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I was fortunate enought to have been able to read this before it was put out on the streets. It was great then and even better now that its really getting recongnition. Great job ZEUS |
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| Reply by: mookie_da_man at Nov 06, '09 15:18 | |
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Kingzeus, this is a great story. I hope you write more |
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| Reply by: JohnGotti at Nov 07, '09 14:42 | |
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Very very good story as well. Like the others I sure do hope that you will write more. |
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| Reply by: Moses at Nov 07, '09 14:50 | |
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Kingzeus, this is a really great story. I hope you write more. I really liked it .... |
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| Reply by: JohnnyP at Nov 07, '09 16:04 | |
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wow excellent writing tallent |
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| Reply by: fishy at Nov 08, '09 04:00 | |
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Thanks all of you, there will definetely more to come! |
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| Reply by: KINGZEUS at Nov 08, '09 20:30 | |
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