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| A Haiku emerges | Started by: Gaenvan on Nov 10, '09 21:57 |
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A white fire explodes. Engulfing heartache soars, A death to a new life. |
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oooohhhh i like it. You would expect it to be like this real long thing and its not even a paragraph good job in my opinion friend!! |
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| Reply by: Vegas_Gionni at Nov 10, '09 22:12 | |
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Very different from other posts that are posted in the streets,but I like it.This is very different and makes your story stand out. |
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| Reply by: Marcus_Burnett at Nov 10, '09 23:53 | |
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this actually make me think and try to find out the background meaning |
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| Reply by: Mike_Lowrey at Nov 10, '09 23:55 | |
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the challenge of a Haiku is to say something with 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables in this case, it was in response to the recent war. |
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| Reply by: Gaenvan at Nov 12, '09 00:22 | |
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My understanding of a haiku leads me to believe that you may have gotten the syllables wrong... not that it really matters to me, i personally thought it was a very unique speech and i loved the poetry. I think I'll try one to reflect my current mood. |
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| Reply by: DeadSeason at Nov 12, '09 01:30 | |
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