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| The Rat Part II | Started by: RemoGaggi on Nov 13, '09 01:54 |
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After leaving the bosses house my first stop was the bar downtown. When i get there i approach the counter and order a beer, while i am drinking it i ask the bartender what he knows about Jimmy Caine otherwise known as JC...he tells me he left about 25 minutes ago. I place a 100 dollar bill on the counter and tell him to keep the change...my next stop was his house on eddison ave. I walk up to JC's door and knock but there is no response, i check under the door mat to see what i can find...and what do you know the key was under there. I let myself in and check the house, no sign of JC...so i figured i would just sit back and relax till he shows up. i sit on his couch while i was waiting and i have to be honest...it was a nice couch, anyway after about an hour i see a car pull in the driveway...i position myself behind the door and wait for him to enter. He opens the door and walks in...SLAM i shut the door behind him, he turns around and i crack him in the face with a left hook which sends him to the floor "who are you?, what are you doing in m- i cut him off and kick him in the face knocking him out. When he wakes up he is tapped to a chair "whats goin- "shut the fuck up JC" his eyes open wide as he replies "how do you know my name?" i know alot about you...you made a big mistake and i think you know what im talking about. he immediatly replies "who Recro?...listen man i diden't say a word to anyone...i swear. If your a rat, that makes you a liar...but i know how to get the truth out of you. I walk into the kitchen to get some supplies, a kitchen knife and some salt. See i needed to make him talk, see if any other outsiders know...if not i could just take out JC and Don Recro and my family would be in the clear. I walk back into the room and apprach JC "so your sure you diden't say anything to anyone. "yes i swear man" after that response i stab JC in the leg with a kitchen knife..."if your lying to me you better tell me now" im not lying man. I look at JC for a few seconds then dump a handfull of salt on my hand and remove the knife from his leg "ok do this the hard way" i throw the salt into his open wound he begins screaming...i place my hand over his mouth "TALK" i remove my hand from his mouth..."ahh this fucking hurts...im telling you the truth man no one kn- i stab him in the same spot and twist the knife...."ahhh stop stop and ill talk "i pull the knife out and listen" he replies, this is the truth, i hang around the streets alot...and one day i over heard Recro talking about...well his business in Detriot ahhh thats's the truth i swear now please stop. I knew now that Recro and the family would be safe with this guy gone, i needed to do one last thing to prove to the boss he was gone...that being said i did what i had to do. "i nod my head at JC, well Jimmy...im Remo and your days on the streets are over", i shoot him in the head with my pistol then in the body a few more times, after i killed him i needed the proof. I opened his mouth and cut out his tounge, stuffed it in an envolope and drove to my bosses house. On my way i call him up, he tells me to go in through the back door. When i arrive i walk through the back door and into his office Don Recro replies "take care of that problem?" i throw the envolope on his desk "its over" he opens the envolope and sees his tounge, "good work Remo, i knew i could count on you...we shake hands and i headed home. |
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good work hun make the boss proud |
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| Reply by: Savannah at Nov 13, '09 14:17 | |
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Very nicely written. |
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| Reply by: Albert_McGuire at Nov 13, '09 15:03 | |
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Bows his head and smiles ahhh all the up and comers in this world lighten my heart good job mate may the lords bless you on your journy |
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| Reply by: WolfgangVonErick at Nov 13, '09 15:08 | |
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Very Nice Remo. I hope to hear more from you in the near future. It makes my day to be able to see people show their abilities. |
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| Reply by: Nichola at Nov 13, '09 15:21 | |
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