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Love is Pain | Started by: Abyssor on Nov 13, '09 15:45 |
Opening my eyes to the delirium and chaos which had unfolded I tried to recollect my conscious mind into some order. My eyes could barely see. I was dizzy from where his heavy blow connected with my head. Bloody stains of rose red painted the floor like a canvas. Bodies lay motionless upon the cold, hard oak ground. |
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Amazing, enthralling, evocative, poetic, electrifying!!! |
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Reply by: Albert_McGuire at Nov 13, '09 16:05 | |
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A work of art, I concur mr mcguire STANDING OVATION AND APPLAUSE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Reply by: Bullingdon-Speaker at Nov 13, '09 16:41 | |
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MHMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!! Amazing sir! STANDING OVATION, APPLAUSE, AND SOME MILD SCREAMS OF DELIGHT!!!!! |
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Reply by: ttarrab at Nov 13, '09 17:25 | |
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Inspiring! Brought a tear to my eye! STANDING OVATION |
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Reply by: don-constable at Nov 16, '09 16:03 | |
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I'm touched. Totally unexpected ending too! |
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Reply by: JakeWhite at Nov 16, '09 16:05 | |
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Melis grins as she listens. That was absolutely beautiful. I loved it. Melis claps with the rest of the people around. |
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Reply by: Melis at Nov 16, '09 16:38 | |
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"Looking at the post makes me just wanna clap my hands and make a official statement that this was REALLY good. But i don't want to be the lonely guy who does that. So, i turn around taking another sip of my coffee. Thinking that this is probably one of the best days in Mafioso life. Now i do remember, MEMO to self, don't forget slicing up the drug dealer for screwing with the prices again. Damn i swear, that guy is in real danger this time." |
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Reply by: Dorean at Nov 16, '09 17:39 | |
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Wow.. This definitely deserves a reply.. Very well written.. ahem.. spoken.. Descriptive and captivating.. just.. Wow |
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Reply by: Arsenal at Nov 17, '09 13:38 | |
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He definitely got what he deserved. One less crazy in the world is a good thing. |
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Reply by: -myrddin- at Nov 17, '09 14:17 | |
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wow... thank you for all your comments. Abyssor smiles. Her red lips glistening in the afternoon sun. |
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Reply by: Abyssor at Nov 25, '09 15:26 | |
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Truly....they were well deserved...Beautiful in words as well as in character |
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Reply by: Bullingdon-Speaker at Nov 29, '09 16:08 | |
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