I don't like wasting my money on things that won't work wolfgang

Hm...pardon me but it's too early for opinions. We need to see his crew in action before we can thinking of commenting.

I thought that it was good, but it seems a little rushed, and there were a few mistakes. Take the time to edit it next time.

Well if this is the way his papers are now i doubt unless he really has the best of the best crew that ir would be any better.

Try looking at it from the point of view that it was this bad because there was too much work for him to handle alone within a week.

Have you saw the size of the paper no work was put in at all.

Tommy walks into the streets,molotov in hand. He makes his way to the newspaper stand where the arguing crowd stood. Tommy pulled his arm back,and tossed the molotov into the Newspaper stand,sending it up in flames.

If my paper is going to cause arguements and complaints and everybody just dreads it,let it burn to the ground. Let's see if The competition is any better.

All right now that what I'm talking about.

Ruaidhri walks away feeling very happy with himself

wow, harsh

Well then. Let's just see what Pavement's stuff is made of.

Yeah one things for sure though it should be alot better then this excuse of a papaer

wolfgang looks up in disgust

hmmm i never figured atommy  to be a quitter   but als  he is   one thing a good or even a great editor needs is backbone   and well arson of your own stuff that is cowardice  in my book

good luck pavement

I guess there is only one competition left for me.

<blockquote>All right now that what I'm talking about.

Ruaidhri walks away feeling very happy with himself</blockquote>

Wow thats the attitude we want to see on the streets, lets ensure no one posts a single thing.

I personally hope you continue with your newspaper Tommy. This was a first edition and I know myself, Boaby and others are anticipating the next issue.

Wow thats the attitude we want to see on the streets, lets ensure no one posts a single thing.

I think that how you do it there.

Nichola looks at those that stand around and shakes her head.

Personally I think anyone that has enough to come out here and try regardless if it isn't as great as someone else could do deserves something in my book. I haven't seen those that are standing here critizing Tommy trying to do what he did.. I agree with El_Nino here in that I hope that Tommy continues his paper because I look forward to seeing what he might be able to do in the future.

Your right it probably is.

It is also

"I think that's how you do it there.

If he comes back, Pavement and I have more competition.

I just posted my paper in the streets.

McKnighter shakes his head.

"Here's how I look at it, if you think it's shit and want it to be burned to the ground, lets see you do better."

"I wouldn't trash talk this paper, it was pretty good for me. Short, sweet, to the point. Sure it was a little short, but this hasn't been running for a long time, we're all used to Marietta's papers."

"So, if you want to see papers like her come out, best to stop dragging these guys through the mud and let them get more experience and understand what needs to be done."

Thank you all for some positive feedback,I have decided to continue. It will be a week or two before we have the paper finished. Thank you all,Have a nice day.