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Rap I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think Started by: hulln13 on Dec 07, '09 21:48

Crack rocks and fatal shots

Everywhere a mommas pickin her sons burial plot

Is it too much to ask for a stop to the bloodshed

Cant we get together for a cookout instead

Na nigga, I want the streets to turn red

Bled, bled out are the streets 

Hard enough to turn a kid out to bigger beats

Guns rattle through the air like a cellmates cage

Pent up in this lifestyle his pity turns to rage

My boy on the block turned over a new page

But he was still a victim of the 12 gauge

It aint easy livin the life of a gangsta

Glamorized and Mesmerized. dreams of money stacked up 

As high as the skies

But thats just a fake reality posed by the new standards in the hell in me

Power has clouded his vision and made him blind to see

What he does to these kids can never set them free

Run down apartments and a cracked up momma

It all adds on to his life filled with drama

Make something of your life

Cuz later on it aint worth gettin stabbed with a rusty knife

Over an eight ball a crack fiend can make ya body stall

Tumble and fall, bleed and crawl

The light starts to fade as an orchestra cascades

Ya life starts flashin before you shots begin to fade

In the distance you can hear a man cry out

Whats the life a hustla really all about

Makin easy money yea I see you

But in his heart he knew it was too good to be true

Now his baby mama is cryin he aint with his kid

Its enough to make his heart cry and flip his lid

Hard to understand and hard to comprehend

A crazy life in these streets it aint worth it no more

So he took the easy way out and pulled the trigga

let his body hit the floor

Funeral services filled with black clothes and teary eyes

Family and friends come together to tell his life but they all lies

Another street nigga and another legacy dies

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A bit simplistic. Being in the rap game for 15yrs(retired now), I d say work on your wordplay a bit more and try to expand the vocabulary a bit. But who knows it could sound good in the booth.


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