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| Rap I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think | Started by: hulln13 on Dec 07, '09 21:48 |
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Crack rocks and fatal shots Everywhere a mommas pickin her sons burial plot Is it too much to ask for a stop to the bloodshed Cant we get together for a cookout instead Na nigga, I want the streets to turn red Bled, bled out are the streets Hard enough to turn a kid out to bigger beats Guns rattle through the air like a cellmates cage Pent up in this lifestyle his pity turns to rage My boy on the block turned over a new page But he was still a victim of the 12 gauge It aint easy livin the life of a gangsta Glamorized and Mesmerized. dreams of money stacked up As high as the skies But thats just a fake reality posed by the new standards in the hell in me Power has clouded his vision and made him blind to see What he does to these kids can never set them free Run down apartments and a cracked up momma It all adds on to his life filled with drama Make something of your life Cuz later on it aint worth gettin stabbed with a rusty knife Over an eight ball a crack fiend can make ya body stall Tumble and fall, bleed and crawl The light starts to fade as an orchestra cascades Ya life starts flashin before you shots begin to fade In the distance you can hear a man cry out Whats the life a hustla really all about Makin easy money yea I see you But in his heart he knew it was too good to be true Now his baby mama is cryin he aint with his kid Its enough to make his heart cry and flip his lid Hard to understand and hard to comprehend A crazy life in these streets it aint worth it no more So he took the easy way out and pulled the trigga let his body hit the floor Funeral services filled with black clothes and teary eyes Family and friends come together to tell his life but they all lies Another street nigga and another legacy dies |
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A bit simplistic. Being in the rap game for 15yrs(retired now), I d say work on your wordplay a bit more and try to expand the vocabulary a bit. But who knows it could sound good in the booth. |
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| Reply by: Saint_Cav at Dec 08, '09 01:35 | |
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