I woke up at about
6:00 for my morning run. I put on my sweat suit and put my gun on me. I was the
top earner in Billy Versedi's crew. I made a lot of money more than some made
men. I lived in a nice condo and I had a black Porsche 64 and a black Rolls-Royce Wraith.  My dad was a legendary boos he ran the crew
before the current boss. He was killed in a ambush

I went out for my jog when all of a sudden

a car swerved right
in front of me about 4 feet from me. They were about 3 guys they were sent to
take me out.              

Hit men: This is for you lucky (they screamed out the
window).

But they were amateurs. I jump behind some trash cans The driver's seat belt  got stuck so I shot him in the head, I was
also know for my shot accuracy. Then the second guy shot out the window, while
the third guy got out the car and hid behind it. He was shooting you

Hit man #2: You fuck, you shot my brother

Both of them ran
out of bullets but the second hit man
drop his bullets. When he went to pick up the bullets on the floor I shot him
in the head. Then while the third hit man was shooting I saw a opening. I jump
out form the trash cans and shot this feet then I quickly ran up and shoot him viciously
ten times in the chest. I was mad

Me: You try to kill me do you know who the fuck I am

Then I took the money and the jewelry they had. And the
idiots also had cocktails so I put htem all in the car properly; got two
cocktails lighted them, and set the car on fire.

So I ran back to the condo. And called up the boss Benny
Vitale he was a cousin of mine, he told me to meet him in 3 hours at a secret
house the family used for meetings

So then I called my brother Louis luciano. To come with
me so we could watch each other back because we both could be in trouble too.
He was in the same crew as we. So, he was the second highest earner.

So I took my Porsche and picked up my brother then headed
too the house. We kept looking back to see if anyone was following us and we
kept two Tommy guns in the back seat and each of us had two revolvers.

We reached their and went into the house. Benny , Billy,
Micheal luciano the caporegime. He was also related to me he was my uncle. We
met up in the the living room of the house

Me: Some three idiots tried to kill me, if I didn't have
my gun on me I would have died

Louis: We have to be watching are back. Our name should
mean something

Benny: I'm sorry about that we will take care of it. But
you took thosedicks  out

Michael; we found out who put the hit on you. It was Joey
Livacoli

Me: I know him me and him got into an argument

Billy: We got information on when we could hit them back.
There is a small family the piccoLies, their doing a drug deal with him and his
crew. We have ties with them.

Benny: You will stay here, you two will be accompanied by
frank and phil to get some stuff. From your places. Then tomorrow Uncle Michael
will come over here with the plan and things you need to hit them

So we stopped by are condos and got are stuff

The next day Michael came by

Michael: okay their going to meet in an abandoned building
by the water , they will come through the front. The drugs will be in the back.
When the Piccolies come with Joey and his crew. The Piccolies will lead Joey's
crew into a big room where you will be and lock the door. Then you will start
shooting, you will kill them and take the money. But also you will kill the Piccolies
two all of the family will be there and their small. They have been causing a
little trouble too, we said their trouble that they have caused would be erased
if they did it but they might do it again. So you will take Joey's money and
Piccolie's drugs, kill two birds with one stone.  Then you will escape on the boats in the back

Michael: 15 men will be with you two and you will be
wearing mask. And you will all be wearing bullet proof vest just in case and have
Tommy guns. You will be equipped with those stuff at the abandoned warehouse

Me: okay we will take care of this, and bring back the
product and profit

Louis: That's right

Michael: And if you take care of this you will most
likely be made. And this is in two days when its time we will call you and pick
you up

So we wait the two days and when we got the call we got
ready and were picked up

Everything went according to plan.

We got set up in
the room, then we waited for about 30min and they came. The door was locked and
we shot, and the good thing about this was that their guns were taken away.

The dummy Joey trusted them.

But what we didn't know
was that 2 cars arrived they were apart of Joey's crew. They came like 2 min
after and heard the gun shots. They rushed in and took out the Piccolies for us
but then they came and took out 5 men. While the other 10 men were fighting Joey's
crew. Me we turned off the lights in the ware house and shot them from behind.
But 5 guys stood behind the other five with guns pointed towards us when the
lights were turned off.

They shot while we
shot. They got my brother in the leg. Then I hid behind a crate. And took them
all out. And the other five were dead. When we walked over what I didn't realized
was about 3 were half dead they attack us with bats and one got me in the balls
but they were quickly shot

We took my brother,
the money, the cocaine, and fled on the boat. When we reached the docks 5 cars
were waiting for us.. My brother was then taken to a underground doctor we had.

A day later when I went to visit him Billy, Benny and Michael
were there. They congratulated us and gave us 100k each.

When you read this please leave some kind of comment here. So I can perfect my sequel

When you read this please leave some kind of comment here. So I can perfect my sequel

It's pretty good. Next time, though, don't bold it all. Kind of annoying. Also, add some more detail and diologue.

I liked it alot. So if your making another one it should be a add on to this one like as if it was a set up with in your family or somthing

wat type of shit thread is this fuck boy

nice writing.. i actually liked it

pretty good writting

good read i liked it

it's too perfect lol.

Its good its kind of like reading of a book

It's pretty good. Missing a couple of words and a couple pauses where you didn't need em. Over-all it was alright.