Chris Moltisanti which is me is a top guy in the Lombardi

crime family. Even though I was not made yet, he works in Aldo Imporoli's crew.

He is the top earner in that crew, and he also ran a casino they had their in

New Orleans. And the place was booming no one ever tried to steal from their

I was in a spiraling beef with a guy from Biagio Romano's

crew in the family. His name was Antonio; he was also the top earner the other

crew. Chris and Antonio always were going at it butting heads

While I was leaving the casino in his car. Three cars swerved

in front of me He tried to get his gun out but it was to many of them. They

took him out of my car and pushed him into another. Then one of the guys'

parked my car off the road somewhere.

Me: Aye, watch my car that is a Rolls Royce and do you know

who the fuck you're messing with

Kidnapper #1: Fuck you we don't care who you are

Kidnapper #2: All we want to do is rob you. Too much heat

Me: You damn right there is going to be too much heat if you

kill me. But there is also going to be heat if you rob me

Me: Your going to regret doing

Kidnapper #1: Ha ha, you so tuff. (He then hit me the gut

with his gun)

Me: I can see you're the hot headed one when I'm killing you

I'm going to have no mercy

He was about to hit me again but

Kidnapper#2: (He stopped him) Don't hit him again, let's not

cause more trouble. This might lead to some more shit we don't need

They drove me to the casino; they held me at gun point and took

me into the casino. The counters were counting the money, recording it, and putting the

vault. When they took  me in they knew

how all the security was set up and everything it was like clockwork. I knew

they had to have a inside man

When got to the "money room" with the vault people had their

guns out. But since they had me hostage the people had to put their guns down.

They taught they were home free, all they needed to do was take the money and

run.

Kidnapper #1: Putt down your gun or he dies

Kidnapper#2 thank you for your quick responding now put all

the money in these bags

Two of the kidnappers had about 8 duffle bags and they threw

in on the table

Kidnapper #2: Get to working you got 3 minuets

But what they didn't know was I had 5 guys behind a shelf.

It was a secret pass way, only two guys knew about it my rhm in the casino and

I. Bettino De Luca, the people behind the shelf heard the commotion. So they

got ready but they got bats instead of guns. There was a switch in the room behind

the shelf their connected to the lights inside the "money room".

John: Ever body ready

Joe: Yeah lets do it

John: Remember they have guns so smack their guns away then

aim for the stomach and below. When their down you can aim for the head.

Because if you just aim for the head first you can miss

John: On three we turn off the lights and bust in their

Joe: 1...2...3... go go go

They go in there and bust them up. I knew what was happening

so I layed on the floor so I wouldn't get hit. I crawled over to the light

switched and turned it on. The guys needed help so I got a bat that was on the

floor and start swinging. One guy kicked me in the balls, but I took a pistol from

the floor when I dropped. Then when he picked me up I shot him in the face.

Then the counters took their guns and handled the rest of them

All the kidnappers were dead except one. We didn't realize

it until he shot Bettino in the head and killed him. And did I mention Bettino

was a good friend to me and Aldo. And the cousin of the Don, I kicked the gun

out his hands

Me: I was angry, you tried to rob you fuck and you killed my

friend. ( I took a shot gun they had off the floor and blasted him in his mouth)

Me: Go outside and take care of the people in the getaway

cars

But it was too late they saw my men coming and drove away

Me: Lock up the casino and lets clean this mess up. But

before we take care of this, we need to find the rat. I have a good I dead of

who it is but I just couldn't prove it. And I don't like to shoot first and ask

questions later

John: I have a good Idea of who it is too

Me & John: Phil

So I took the shot gun and before he could get his gun up

shot him in the head

Me: That's what happens to rats now let's get this place

cleaned up. Jake call Aldo and tell him to bring two vans. For a "delivery"

We cleaned up the place. When Aldo came he was distraught.

We broke the news to the boss and he set up a meeting at my condo. To discuss

about what to do with this

Me: I'm sorry about what happen, I took care of the rat that

caused it though." He had bad luck in a casino"

Lombardi: I don't care, that's only half of what I want

done. He didn't even hurt anybody, I want the family that was behind this. I

want one of their made man dead.

Aldo:  I'm sorry too

he was a good friend of me and Chris. And a great cousin to you. After we broke

the news to you I met with a agent we have working In there. He told us that

they picked up a guy from a crew and he turned a informant and told him that

his family.  It was Steve Gallo's family,

their a small up and coming family here

Lombardi: I know them Steve got authorization to start a family.

That fuck, I'm going to make sure I stomp his crew into the grown. I'm erase

them before they even get to make a mark

Me: Tell me what to do and I'll take care of it

Went you read it can you please post your comment on this thread

Very interesting. Is there a part 2?

Yes their will be a part two. When I get made

I enjoyed it as i was reading it i was picturing what was happening,, would love you read the second part.. cant wait very good job..

Chris, I can appreciate the endeavour you have put into creating something to entertain the streets. Good effort. My main advice, if you want it, would be to first run through this by yourself down a back alley somewhere to check that it flows well and sounds exactly as you want. Do it twice, thrice, or more. I'm sure there's more to come from you though.

Thank you Godfather, I will take your advice and put it towards helping my next story

Excellente! I liked the plot, it was like reading a book, but an action book and there's a very cool main character. It was also a good story because it's like a movie running in my head I can picture even every minor details. I would be delighted to read the second one.

My favorite part is when you shot the guy in the face after he kicked you in the groin...and that it wasn't another bank robbery story.

I think if you clean up the formatting a bit you'd get more people reading, though that's just my opinion.

Anyway, looking forward to another story from you.

Dino Moretti hears Chris Moltisantii telling he tale.Dino Claps loudly.very nicely done. i loved it.and i realy hope there is a part  two chris.