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Rising from the ashes. | Started by: TheDeathShouts on Jan 18, '10 07:55 |
TDS stands in the middle of the main street. He is collecting his courage to make a speech to those who pass by. "Well.. My father used to tell me that he will pass away someday, hopefully on his bed when he would be really old. That wasn't the case as it seems. I always admired him about his bravery to mix up with the Mafia. I had too many fights with him about it. I told him that Mafia is something he shouldn't be in. That it would be a shame to lose his life for that stupid Omerta, while doing embarrassing things that range from stealing a purse to raiding a depot. However, my sayings didn't alter his feelings. We had a bad fight when he left home for America. I didn't get to say a proper goodbye. To make a long story short, I am here to honor his death. I will do anything to get to his position and reach his fame. I will even kill if I am needed to." TDS seems a bit stressed while making out some last words. "I will avenge your death father. I shall conquer the mafia world", he yells at everyone. |
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Reply by: Zuldazar at Jan 18, '10 08:01 | |
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TDS greets Zuldazar and replies "I'm sorry. You got me wrong. I won't kill for revenge. My revenge will be to become a successful mafioso. That will be my revenge, a peaceful revenge." |
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Reply by: TheDeathShouts at Jan 18, '10 08:20 | |
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Revenge is a bad ethic to join the Mafia on, self gain is a much better one. |
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Reply by: ______ at Jan 18, '10 10:46 | |
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Though revenge can be the best motivator to work hard at times, if you have a clear goal. |
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Reply by: Derice at Jan 18, '10 10:53 | |
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Derice, it is extremely difficult to have a clear goal when you have Vengence on the mind. Although you are right that it is a very motivational way of thinking, I believe that trying to better yourself for personal gain is a much more lucrative endeavor. |
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Reply by: ______ at Jan 18, '10 10:58 | |
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its good that your goal for revenge is to be sucessful i too lost a couple of family members to these mafiosai and revenge got some of them killed i want the same thing to make them proud and do what they didnt do and that should be good enough revenge for them as its good enough for me violence only gets more violence and revenge will just continue until everyone is wiped out . but vengance wont bring them back so do what you must i agree with your goal TDS |
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Reply by: Rocco_Leone at Jan 18, '10 11:00 | |
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Indeed, some say that revenge can give a person much more drive and motivation, but too often someone can become blinded by their quest and ultimately crumble without achieving their goal. And then their life has been wasted, and the bitterness is passed to their son, perhaps without learning any important lessons. TDS, I respect your peaceful revenge. I feel that you are going about it in the right way. Becoming a successful mafioso, and who knows one day, you may even be in a position to exact a more gruesome revenge... |
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Reply by: Arabface at Jan 18, '10 11:03 | |
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"I told him that Mafia is something he shouldn't be in. That it would be a shame to lose his life for that stupid Omerta, while doing embarrassing things that range from stealing a purse to raiding a depot." |
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Reply by: JackJones at Jan 18, '10 11:06 | |
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In all honesty, I doubt that your success would be much of a "Revenge", I'm sure that your fathers killers have very little concern as to if you become successful or not. It's good that you find your motivation this way, and I must say that it is good to hear of a fellow Mafioso who are looking to better themselves, but I fail to see how this "Revenge" will effect those whom you wish to seek Revenge on? |
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Reply by: ______ at Jan 18, '10 11:09 | |
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JackJones,I'm assuming his father is TheDeathCalls. TheDeathShouts,I know how it feels to lose a loved on. I hope you can make him proud. Coach lights a cigarette and moved on to the next street corner. |
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Reply by: Coach at Jan 18, '10 12:05 | |
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As coach said, TheDeathCalls was my father. Further on, ______, I'd love you had a name so I can call you in someway. "I always admired him about his bravery to mix up with the Mafia." Thank you all for your encouragement and criticism. Both are helpful. |
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Reply by: TheDeathShouts at Jan 18, '10 12:25 | |
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I have to respectfully disagree with _____. I believe success is the best revenge and, as a side affect, may result in those that killed his father to be less successful. |
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Reply by: Anarchy-Grey at Jan 18, '10 12:40 | |
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Forthedead squeeze his fists and look to the sky shouting full of anger and pride." Revenge is a matter of honor. Honor makes a man....", " Let help you to gain your honor my friend".... |
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Reply by: Forthedead at Jan 18, '10 13:26 | |
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Tugaone walks into TheDeathShouts and puts his hand on his shoulder: Tugaone walks off the streets, back into the shady alley he came from. |
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Reply by: Tugaone at Jan 18, '10 17:20 | |
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TheDeathShouts, my mother happened to know your father and she was a very lucky lady to have known him. She was very proud of him and from what I knew they were good friends. Even though we have never met and now this is the first time we have spoke. I would like to offer my hand in friendship. Like the one our parents had. We can work through this world, as they did, and look out for each other as family should do. Do not worry about this "revenge". Whatever it may be used for can only bring bad things. See this as more of a new beginning for you. A place to build respect and loyalty. A place to find friends and family. A reason to live and die for. That isn't something everyone finds in life. Welcome to the mafia. |
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Reply by: Eve at Jan 18, '10 17:24 | |
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Eve, my father used to talk about your mother a lot. seems the both were lucky to know each other. I'd like to welcome you too, in the mafia. |
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Reply by: TheDeathShouts at Jan 18, '10 18:02 | |
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Dino walks over to DTS "you will make you father poud.do what you set out to do conquer the mafia world and you father will be happy and know his death was not for nothing |
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Reply by: DinoMoretti at Jan 19, '10 21:26 | |
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