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The Good Doctor? | Started by: RebeccaMacleod on Feb 05, '10 23:50 |
Becca slammed the door to her coupe and glanced up at the bright whitewashed front of the old plantation house. This had been the place where Rebecca had learned to ride horses, hosted her first party, and been introduced to much of New Orleans's upper class. Her grandmother had bought it as a "getaway" a few years ago, when Becca was 13. But recently it had been transformed into a training grounds of sorts for the young woman. She turned back to the coupe to grab a ribbon out of the passenger seat before hurrying up the marble steps. Grandmere didn't tolerate tardiness for these morning runs. As she jogged down the porch and into the house, she noticed a few remnants of what looked like a wild night: three empty bottles of Jameson littered about the living room, a collapsed curtain rod, the still-turning phonograph...was that a man's jacket laying on the chair? She slowed and went over to examine the grey blotch lying on the arm of the couch. Sure enough, some man had left his suit jacket there. A strange thing to leave...and his tie, too? Becca shrugged and decided to take the articles up to her grandmother. Maybe she would know whom they belonged to. With a sharp turn, the young woman hurried up the stairs to her grandmother's room. |
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As her eyes blinked open Kates first perceived the early morning sun, and promptly clenched them shut, groaning. Must have been a late night. As her formidable brain struggled out of its sluggishness, she next realized that she was completely naked. Must have been a fun night, too. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 05, '10 23:58 | |
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"Ju-just a minute, Becca! Wait right there! Or go get some water to drink!" There was a soft sound of rummaging inside of the room, complete with whispers that were cut off with a loud thump--as though a body had hit the ground. Becca's eyes widened with concern and she opened the door immediately. "Grandmere! Are you all--Oh, dear God!" There was a young man lying on the floor next to her grandmother's bed. A stark naked young man. A rather handsome, stark naked young man. Becca blushed furiously as he scanned her drowsily. He screwed up his face and put his head in his hands, speaking in a low moan. "Now, I know I didn't bag a teenager last night. God, please tell me I didn't...and if I did, please tell me her parents aren't home." As Becca stared, stunned, at the man, Kates hurried into the room from the closet, her athletic clothes apparently hastily thrown on. She looked between her granddaughter and the young man and groaned softly, closing her eyes and hiding her face in her hands. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 06, '10 00:22 | |
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Kates buttoned her skintight black pants and prayed the situation was a just a bad dream. Hopefuly, she opened her eyes. Nope. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 06, '10 00:33 | |
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Becca shook her head and mumbled to the young man, setting his jacket and tie down on the bed. "Um...I think these are yours." He gave her a confused "thanks" before he scurried out with her grandmother. Becca stood there, blinking, for a moment, before Kates's words sunk in. A sex talk? Now? "Umm...I think I know...plenty about all of that, Grandmere..." She glanced back at the closed door before turning back to Kates with a badly smothered smile. "And from the looks of it, you manage to get better catches than I do!" She let out a soft chuckle before motioning toward the back door. "Let's go running. If you feel like you absolutely have to tell me something like that, you can do it while we're moving." |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 06, '10 00:48 | |
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Kates falls back on her bed and crosses her legs, raising her eyebrow at Becca. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 06, '10 00:59 | |
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Becca had almost been to the door when she heard her grandmother's words. She stopped in her tracks and turned slowly back, crossing her arms uncomfortably. As she spoke, her face reddened and she found her gaze dropping to the floor. "Well...I mean...you know...like...remember Steve? I went out with him for a year, it was pretty serious...? Um...I kind of...well, it was silly, but he told me he loved me, and it was prom night and...and how about we just...just go?" Without waiting for her grandmother, Rebecca suddenly turned and bolted out the door, down the stairs, through the kitchen, and into the courtyard, her feet slapping against the cobblestones with echoing noise. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 06, '10 01:13 | |
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Blinking, Kates burned Steve's name on her list of things to take care of, before chasing Becca outside. The younger woman was flying- she'd been soft when they started, like her father. Not a criticism of Jack, of course- the man could still take care of business when he had to. But Becca had a hard, ruthless vitality within her that had only recently begun to shine, just as hard winds and the sand will purify anything left in the desert. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 06, '10 01:23 | |
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The two women laughed as they jogged down the beaten path. Becca leapt over a root and gasped before continuing her story. "And so the next thing I knew, she was passed out on the floor, drunk as a skunk, and it looked like I was the one who had to carry her home. So I looked over to the guy she'd come with--and he was trying to sneak out! I almost had to drag him back to help me get her in the car." She took a deep breath, her eye trained on the thinning trees that lined the path. "And now they're getting married for whatever reason got into their empty heads." Rebecca chuckled breathlessly as the two ran out of the woods, pausing at the top of the long slope leading the final half-mile down through the defunct fields and to the house. Kates pulled her leg back to stretch it, a soft grunt escaping her. As she set it down, she shook her head with a smile. "Not quite what it used to be." Becca chuckled and shook her head as she stretched an arm behind her head. "It's a miracle it is what it is, Grandmere. Ready to run back to the house and get a shower?" The older woman nodded firmly before taking off down the hill at a slow jog. Becca soon followed, keeping at Kates's side. "You know, Grandmere...two weeks after prom, after Steve broke up with me...a couple of my Sicilian friends went over to his house and you know what happened? He fell down the stairs and broke his leg. Couldn't play baseball again, and he was gonna be a professional. Shame, don't you know?" As she glanced over to Kates with a small smirk, Rebecca noticed a few black cars trundling up the long, dusty drive and through the front gate. She was struck by the military movements of the man who got out to open the gate. "Um, Grandmere, were you expecting some men?" |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 06, '10 01:47 | |
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Kates slowed to a jog and then a walk, evaluating the cars that spilled into her long driveway. Five cars. As the line ground to a halt, men began to pile out of them. Individually they were hardly impressive, but what they lacked in quality they more than made up for in quantity. Two pairs of green eyes cycled through them, counting to twenty. A more refined figure stepped out in front of them and removed his fedora. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 06, '10 17:12 | |
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Becca's breath heaved her chest in and out as she sprinted for As she set foot on the gravel of the driveway, she heard the heavy panting of a man close behind her. Gathering a last bit of strength, she leaped for the porch, trying to scramble over the railing before the thug behind her could get her. She swung one leg over, and was about to hop to the old wood floor of the porch when she was jerked back by her other leg. Becca turned with a furious green gaze to the man who had wrapped his saucer-sized palms around her leg and kicked ferociously at him. His grip didn't loosen a bit, but she still managed to connect her toe hard with his jaw. She was unsure of who was in more pain, though. "Let me go, you bastard!" He only replied with an empty grin and reached toward her, trying to pull her back down to the ground. She gave a low growl and slammed her fist into the top of his head. Stunned, he began to let her go. As she whipped her leg away from him, though, she felt a pair of strong arms picking her up around the waist and lifting her bodily. Another goon had sneaked up behind her and snatched her up. As she began to kick and scream, he shoved a handkerchief over her mouth. It was soaked in something that reeked sweetly. Soon, Becca was lying limp in his arms, barely aware of what was going on around her. She had a faint feeling that she was lying against her grandmother, though, and her drowsed mind assured her that this meant everything would be all right. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 06, '10 20:40 | |
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Even before she opened her eyes Kates felt the leather straps tightly holding her down. Her naked back recoiled against the cold metal of the table, but she could barely move herself an inch. The man in the fedora, now clad in a white lab coat, sat a few feet away, his gaze fixed on her as he tapped a scalpel gently against the side of his kneecap. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 07, '10 15:03 | |
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"Think the doc would let her out for us to play with her?" "Nah, not 'til he's done with whatever it is he's doing with them. An' she might not even be alive then." "Shame. Bet she ain't even been nailed yet." Becca's eyes cracked open, watching the burly figures through a slight chloroform haze. They were leering back to her through some steel bars. Neither seemed to notice she was waking up. Becca remained still on the cement floor until the two men turned away from the cage, conversing lazily about their recent conquests. The girl blinked several times, her mind racing. Where was her grandmother? She quietly checked her surroundings. She was in what looked like a tiger cage she had seen in a circus. She remembered the mangy tiger, billed as "A Ferocious, Lithe Beast of the Orient" lying in a defeated way as the disappointed crowd tried to prod it into action. Once it was finally goaded enough, it hurled itself at the bars and spat furiously at the onlookers. But the bars wouldn't budge, and the people stood in awe or laughed at the creature. Becca sat up slowly, realizing that her grandmother was nowhere near. Although a small part of her told her that she should stay put and Kates would come rescue her, her pragmatic nature told her that she would have to get out of here and find the woman herself. She evaluated her surroundings: two 300-pound men were guarding her in a cage built to keep a tiger inside, and there wasn't anything she could use as a weapon. Lovely. Well, wait. She reached behind her head and felt her hair. They hadn't removed the ribbon from her hair. It wouldn't kill anyone by itself, but it could prove useful. She glanced back at the guards just as serendipity showed its beautiful face. "I'mma go take a leak. Watch her while I'm gone, a'ight?" "Yeah, yeah. Hurry back. Don't want the doc comin' in with only one of us out here. Plus, you's the one wid the keys." The other goon waved his hand behind him as he left. Becca crept slowly toward the remaining man, pulling the ribbon taut between her two hands, wrapping the material around one of her palms. He still hadn't heard her when she was right behind him. Deftly, she slipped her arms through the bars and pulled the ribbon tight against his neck, slamming his head back into the bar behind him. He choked and fumbled for his gun, but Becca banged his head five, six, ten more times against the bar, leaving him with a bloody gash on the back of his head and a cracked skull. When he was limply hanging against the ribbon, almost breaking it with his weight, Becca quickly searched for his gun, managing to pull it out and lay it next to her. She let the body drop to the ground and coiled into the corner of the cage, waiting for the other guard to appear. As soon as he did, she whipped the gun out, aimed it square for the man's chest, and called out authoritatively. "Show me your hands and drop your gun where you are. Now!" His gaze shifted between his companion's collapsed body and the gun in the young woman's hands. The wheels seemed to crank behind his eyes for a moment before he complied with her request, holding one hand up to show it was free before standing in a surrendering pose. "Now get over here and unlock this thing." She kept her gun trained on him as he moved, her finger snug against the trigger. As soon as the lock to the cage clinked open, she shot him. His face was a little surprised as he crumpled to the ground with a creek of blood pouring from his chest. Becca quickly exited the cage, leaping over his body to avoid stepping in the blood. She scanned her surroundings, hoping no one had been summoned by the gunshot. It didn't look like it. She jogged through the warehouse and down a corridor, peering cautiously into the darkened rooms that lined the walls. "Goodbye, Miss MacLeod." Rebecca jumped and turned as she heard these words, her gun at the ready. But they had come from a room down the hall. She hurried to it, shoving the door open to see her grandmother lying on a table, the slender man from before standing over her with a needle in her arm. "Get the fuck away from her!" The man turned, confused, as the young girl charged into the room. He reached for a scalpel to defend himself, but soon found that there was a rather inconvenient hole in his stomach. He groaned and fell over, twitching on the floor as life poured out of him. Becca hurried to the table and checked her grandmother's pulse. Still there. She gave a soft sigh of relief. But it was hardly over. She'd need to get out of here...and she couldn't carry her grandmother. She'd have to wait for the woman to wake up. Becca rummaged in the doctor's pockets, found a ring of keys, and quickly locked the door to the room. She looked around the room and began to open cabinets and drawers, looking for any kind of drugs she could take with her to sell later. Hey, why not try to make a buck off of this guy? After she had filled her pockets with bottles of pills and powders, Becca sighed and checked her grandmother's pulse again. She was still alive, but pretty heavily sedated. Finding Kates's clothes crumpled in a laundry hamper, Becca brought them and laid them over the unconscious woman's stomach. With another sigh, she stroked her grandmother's hair and waited for the woman to wake up. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 07, '10 16:45 | |
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Her green eyes struggling to open, Kates stared at her granddaughter and rasped. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 07, '10 17:49 | |
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Rebecca herself had almost been drowsing over her grandmother, the adrenaline having drained from her system, when the woman woke up. Becca grinned and planted a quick kiss on her grandmother's forehead. "There you are! Come on, Grandmere, we've got to get out of here. I put your clothes right here...I'll turn around and let you dress. Tell me when you're done." Becca promptly turned around and took a few steps away from her grandmother. After a moment of silence, she heard the sounds of Kates slipping to the floor and putting her clothes on. "Becca...what happened?" "I'm not sure...but this guy had a needle in your arm, and whatever he wanted to do with you, I don't think it was any good. But I managed to get a couple of his guys and then...well, the good doctor is on the floor there." She pointed to the corpse on the ground. Seeing her grandmother was dressed from the corner of her eye, Becca turned back around and leveled her gaze with Kates's. "Now we've gotta get out of here. If he had that many thugs at his disposal to get us here, I'd hate to imagine what would happen if they found out he was dead." Rebecca produced the keys and her gun, handing the latter over to Kates. "I think you'd do better with this than I could." She glanced over to the tray of knives and scalpels. "I'll see what I can do with these if we run into any trouble. Probably not much more than a nuisance, but it would be a nice distraction." She carefully grabbed several of the sharp instruments before carefully unlocking the door, peering out. No one. She motioned to Kates to follow her as the pair sneaked out down the hall. The fifth door they tried led to a garage where three men loitered next to the sleek black cars they had driven to Kates's house before. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 07, '10 18:11 | |
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As Kates walked the sound of her feet grew from unsteadily scraping to forcefully rapping against the pavement. By the time they got to the cars she felt nearly like her old self. Looking at Becca, the girl wordlessly ducked behind her car as her grandmother continued walking forward. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 07, '10 18:40 | |
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Becca grinned back to her grandmother. "Thanks, Grandmere. I...I just wanted us both to get out of there in one piece." She paused for a moment, staring out at the world moving outside the window. Her mind was turning over memories like stiff book pages. The men's conversation about her as she lay in the cage, the hands of a would-be rapist grabbing her body, the doctor who had gone through incredible lengths to obtain her grandmother and herself for some sort of medical experiment...even the backseat of Steve's 1932 Buick Victoria, his body pressing heavily onto hers as he ignored her soft sounds of discomfort. She sighed and leaned her head against the glass, her hand absently rubbing her leg. Abruptly, she turned her head to her grandmother and spoke. "Are our bodies that desirable a commodity that we can just be taken without a thought?" She blinked quickly, half-surprised at what she had just said, but continued gazing levelly at her grandmother. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 07, '10 19:12 | |
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Kates chuckled, but her eyes maintained the seriousness they had for the duration of the drive. |
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Reply by: Kates at Feb 07, '10 19:39 | |
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Becca gave her grandmother a small smile before staring back out the windshield. She thought about what her grandmother had said, running her mind's hands over it. She reached a hand over and patted her grandmother's, smiling broadly as she spoke in a low murmur. "Thanks, Grandmere. I'll remember that." After a few more moments of driving, she saw the plantation appear like a tiny white Monopoly house in the distance. Becca burst into a sudden bout of laughter. You know, we still haven't showered. I bet we stink worse than we realize." She winked to her grandmother. "Race to see who gets to shower first?" Her grandmother chuckled, shaking her head. "I think you've seen me naked two too many times today...you go first--I'll call your father and tell him we put in a bit of extra training time." Becca grinned and nodded, resting her head against the cool window and absently counting the fenceposts on the slope down to the house. |
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Reply by: RebeccaMacleod at Feb 07, '10 21:01 | |
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