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Revenge pt 1 Started by: DonGhost on Feb 16, '10 22:10

Revenge pt1

               Screams
and shouts scatter through the hall way of the North Burger shopping mall.
Dwight, Me, and Drexl empty our guns into the unsuspecting spectators. A face
which I recognize begs for his life. It is the judge who sentenced my father to
twenty years in federal prison for racketeering. He is with his young infant
son, and his wife. I was furious.

              I slit his wife's throat with my
knife first, then shoots the judge between his eyes. I leave the infant crying
in his stroller. Disarray fills the air as I reload my weapon, and continue to
shoot. I step into the blood soaked, and gun shell filled floors. Women, toddlers,
men, and people of all ages lay dead. I think to myself how this had to be done.
This was retaliation for the recent betrayal of the family who owned the mall.
We had gunned down the rival family's Don, and Consigliore.

               There
family was finished yet our motto was "leave no witnesses", or we would be shot
by the higher ups. So as I stood guard for any police, Drexl and Dwight planted
charges on all corners of the mall. When they were finished a single squad car
pulled up to the mall's main parking lot. I executed the officer with ease. Once
we were far enough from the mall. Drexl and Dwight detonated the charges.

We then ran to our getaway car. With Drexl steering, and Dwight riding shotgun
I was on the back with a build in mounted machine gun. We were nearly to our
safe house when a speeding car pulled up a side of us and ripped through the
car with bullets. A week later I woke up in the hospital I was told by a nurse
that I had been in a comma. When I asked about Drexl and Dwight the nursed said
that she was sorry, but they had been killed in a car crash.

Noooo! I shouted then the nurse
said that I had some visitors, when I had told her that they could come in. A
man who I recognized as the Rival Don I had killed son. He pulled a pistol out
and shot the nurse then me.

                              THE END BE
EXPECTING PT 2!

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*Claps* loundly. i was down the hall and heard you talking and i had to come closer to ehar what yiou  was saying. i enjoyed it  DonGhost a little dark but very nice though. can't waite for you to tell me aobut  pt.

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If there's any happy ending to this at all, it's that I died in this story and will thankfully be absent from Revenge Pt 2.

You never cease to amaze, Don Ghost, and you always crack me up, my Friend. Should any other mobster wish to include me in a story where myself and my arch-nemesis Dwight-Schrute walk around shopping malls named after hamburgers killing women and infants, by all means.

Drexl punches himself in the face a few times. It is the only semi-logical reaction he can think of in this particular circumstance

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That is where you're wrong, Drexl.

We'll be running around shooting women and children in a shopping center as zombies in Pt. 2.

Duh!

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