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The Job Started by: John_Ibraham on Jun 06, '10 06:11

John "Johnny the gent" Imbraham- protagonist
Anthony Trupiano- boss
Vincent "Shotgun Vinny" Cammarata - (my) Capo
Frank "Big Frank" Palozzolo- Capo
Joseph Trupiano- Friend (Anthony's nephew)
Anthony Gizzo - Boss of the Lazia crome family (Kansas)
Carl "Tuffy" DeLuna- Underboss
Anthony cohen- Made man (close friend)


John Imbraham  is a soldier in The Trupiano Family in St.Louis. He is apart of Vicent "Shotgun Vinny" Cammarata (you will se why they call him Shotgun Vinny later on) crew. Hew was a real good earner and a gentleman at the same time. People paid up thier protection money with no problem because he was nice and resonable. And he still made a dumpload of money.  One of his friends was Joseph Trupiano the nephew of the boss, he is in Frank "Big Frank" Palozzolo crew. And the reason they calledhim that because he was 6 foot 10. An dhis other main friend was Anthony Cohen a made man in The Lazia crime family of Kansas city. The Trupiano and Lazia worked tother closely thier almost like one family. Because of the relantionship Ibraham has with him

 

The families headquarters is the Bilongo night
John: (enters the office at the family hq)


Boss: Hey John


Jospeh: How is it going


John: Im good


Vincent and Frank: Ok boy take a seat


Vincent; Me and frank met up with Carl "Tuffy" DeLuna the underboss of the Lazia family. He inform me that some fools have a shipment of cash comething through here.


Frank: Thier going to put it in thier hangout and ship it out in three days.


Vincent: Word is thier is about half a mill in thier. I dont know what these boys have been doing but thier going ot make us rich


John: You got that right
Boss: Ok, John and Jospeh. Show me that you can take care of things like this.


Frank: Also Anthoney Cohen wants in on the action


Boss: No problem, the three of you will meet here tomorrow. Vincent call anthony up and tell him to meet us here tomorrow.


Vincent: Anthony is in town already or at least he soppose to be. He is sopose to be coming here soon


(Anthony walks in)
Anthony: Aye, here I am


John and Joseph: How is it going


Anthony: Im good (shakes everybodys hands)


Anthony: OK so what is going on with our little job


Joseph: Tomorrow we are meeitng here to handle the details.
(So every body heads home)

 


John: (Calls anthony)


John: You need me to pick you up


Anthony: Yeah I could use  ride


John: Ok, the meetings stars in 3 hours, I pick oyu up in 2 and a half. Where are you staying at?


Anthony: The Billmont Hotel


John: Oh ow, classy


Anthony: (Laughs) Gotta use this money on something


John: (Laughs) Ok well Ill be thier. See you later


Anthony: alright bye


(John goes and picks up anthony and heads to the club)
Everybody was already thier


John & Anthony: (Enters the club's office)


Boss: Ok you two sit down


Frank; Ok tier place is a good size and you all will have to get through gaurds to get the money and you need a big truck


Vincent: We already got the truck toether, I wil be driving I havent had some action in a while. Thier are actually three trucks


Joseph: Whats under that cloth


Frank: Glad you ask (takes cloth off)


Frank: these are the weapons you will be using


(They pick thier weapons and put them in a bag)


John: Your not taking anything vince


Vince: I got something special


John: O I forgot (laughs) I know what it is hence the nickname we gave you


Vince: Ok this is what will happen we will be in the last car and  thier will be five people each in the other two cars. They will crash into the building first and we will follow. Then we will jump out the car and get the money.


Frank: So everybody will meet in are garage and phillis avenue tomorrow. You all will load up thier.
(So everybody heads home and The next day everybody show up on time)

 


Frank:  Ok everybody is here, load up you got 20 min to do this move move move


(So everybody gets in the cars and drive)


Then the first car crash's in to the place and the other two follow


(John, Vincent, joseph, and anthony jump out hte last car)


While their men are handling the gaurds, they run to the counting room


John: Keep going


John: take a left now


(The lights were turned off, and 4 gaurds junmp out the corner with bats)


One hit John in the leg, then John shot him in the head


Then one guy tryied to pull a gun on vincent but Vincent  showed him why they called him shotgun vinny.


Vincent; Huh you wanna mess with me (Vincent broke his hand, then pulled a shotugn out his coat and shot him in thebelly


John: Get off of them I shot the last two gaurds in the head with two pistols


John: Lets go
(John and everybody else went into the room, they toke all the money off the table)
JOhn where is the rest of the money
Counter: I dont know
John: Vincent, give me your shotgun
John: (takes shotgun and puhshes it in counters face) I asked you nicely now I have to get mean. Stop fucking with me and tell me where it is
Counter: Ill tell you , its up your butt. (He pulls a gun on john)
John: (As soon as he did that John blasted him with the gun)
When the counter drop to the ground, John heard a wierd sound
Vincent: Dont move or you die like your friend
John: You head that (He moved the the body and the carpet)
John: What is this (he broke the lock and opened the door)
John: Ha ha here is the big money take it and lets go

(They took the money and jumped in the car. And we drove back to the garage)


Boss: Ha ha you guys did it, motherfuckers ha ha


(Everybody was thier to congragulate them)


Anthony Gizzo: Good job


Carl "Tuffy" DeLuna: This is a blessed Partnership!!!


Frank "Big Frank" Palozzolo: All of you will be moving up soon


(Thier were ocunters thier and they counted the money)


While they were counting The boss took John and Anthony aside


Boss: You two will be made soon. This really helped you, the Consigeliere and  the underboss will be comeing back to st.louis soon.


(After they finished, it was a total of the estimated 500,000)


Everbody got thier cut and poeple left

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When you read this thread please post your opinions so I can make the sequel better

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John the format was a little hard but it was a pretty good story brother. I would like to see a little more movement between the characters as individuals rather than as a whole. But all in all i enjoyed it!

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Thank you boss i will be sure to that into consideration for my sequel 

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I agree with SINGER's input. It is a pretty good story man. You just need to work on your format and make it a bit easier to follow for people and maybe add a bit more of description to people's movement and all that instead of just saying that they did something. But all in all I think with a bit more work you could be a real good writer.

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I completly understand. The sequel is coming out whenever I get made

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The sequel is coming out soon now

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