Fyodor crept up the narrow dark corridor looming over him, slightly annoyed that to join the secret club whispered in his ear, he would have to do more than chat with his friends over a luke-warm coffee. No. Fyodor was here to kill. Cocking the side of his large automatic weapon, F listened out for voices. For once, glad to be unnoticed F had to be on the wave length of very different gangsters.

'I'm glad he's dead, now we can sort things out'

'yeah well dont get above yourself, either we make the new crew or we can still pretend we had nothing to do with this'

F had all he needed. It was disappointing to realise that those responsible for bringing him into the crew, those he had come to regard as family had other interests, however Fyodor knew which loyalties were more important.

'I'm sorry'

Fyodor exclaimed as he pressed the barrel of his machine pistol against the back of his former teacher. Squeezing the trigger resulted in a small fountain of gore and a twinge of regret. A twinge offset by the sharp vision of those with the helmets and the guns entering through the warehouse door. Fyodor is angry as he expends the rest of the ammunition, believing he has been brought into a situation he does not understand......

Not a bad piece, just curious as to why you used Fryodor in some place, and F in others?

F hurries up the cold stone stairs, his face covered in a thin sheen of cold sweat. 'who could have called the police?' he thinks to himself. It was probably Phenomenon. He always seemed to ask to many questions. Yes thats right, it looked like Fyodor might have to make one last visit before the night was out. Unclipping the magazine from his bulky weapon he realises he is out of ammunition. 'No matter' he decides as a battered yellow taxi comes into, view, raising his arm, as it slows he swings open the passenger door, collapsing down on the seat as he exhales Penomenons address. The last kill of the night would just have to be more personal. (intermittent laziness probably)

If thats a thank you for actually giving you a post on your thread, then you are welcome.

yeah when this is made into a blockbuster you get 10 percent.