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| The Ninja Assassin | Started by: Insane2Cool on Jul 12, '10 22:25 |
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"Long ago there was a story",the old man told the kids
"I remember it like yesterday"
Erm...I remember i was walking in my old abandoned apartment home when i saw 3 guys hassling this young women for her money,i remember i slipped behind the complex gated an sat in silence as i witnessed this horror,,All i could hear was screaming an i could barely see faces to see if i recognized someone,,thats when the women took a shard run for it an started to chant such words that i never heard,,"Shan hwo Dang"and again "Shan how Dang" an everything became silent for a little an all i could hear was...screeches an screams an i began to hear a panting the sound of a siren,,
I looked up an saw the man in a black robe with a marble look to it an a bright glare was around him,,
"Was this what the women was chanting to", i told myself
Running home i couldnt do nothing but cover my face in cold water because this couldnt be real this had to be a dream
''Boom
"What was that",i thought to myself as i looked around my liveing room curve
There it was the glare from the salying down stairs an i could make out a face that was pale an white an he was looking right into my eyes as if he was goin to strike me down as we stared
"Young man", he said as he broke the silence
"Yes",i choked out as my heart was beating faster then light
"I have short time an i could feel the energy from your body an that your the chosen one from when you was hiding behind the gate"
"How the hell did he know i was behind the gate",i thought to myself
"Take this word an this shard necklace an remember Shang hwo Dang"---an he was gone he had just disappeared
Confused an not knowing what to do i sat the necklace an sword on the table an glanced at it longer then i have ever glanced before
"What was my purpose to wield such things of this manner"
"Am i suppose to kill someone or what""Please come back bright glare man",i screamed out
I guess ill sleep on it
Waking up at 5am
Looking up i could see a bird hit my window,,the same blue an black bird that hit my window yesterday,,looking out my window i could see the same red van rammed into that same white car from yesterday
stepping back from my window i shooked my head
"No this cant be happening to me i remember all this",I shouted
"This is all dejavu"
--->TO BE CONTINUED<--- |
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Galactus hears Insane's story in the mafioso streets.
That story was well written and told my friend.I cant wait for the second part;)
Galactus then shakes Insane's hand and walks off. |
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| Reply by: Galactus at Jul 12, '10 22:29 | |
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Insane tips his fedora at Galactus
"Thanks man an second part will be coming tommorow" |
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| Reply by: Insane2Cool at Jul 12, '10 22:45 | |
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I am looking foward to second part aswell! |
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| Reply by: BloodyFaster at Jul 15, '10 09:08 | |
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Thanks Boss an Sorry for the delay with the second part,,I been a lil busy lately but its coming |
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| Reply by: Insane2Cool at Jul 15, '10 13:39 | |
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Good story man, keep up your writing. Hope to see more of this series in the future. |
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| Reply by: JamesConway at Jul 15, '10 16:24 | |
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You will for sure,,an thanks |
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| Reply by: Insane2Cool at Jul 16, '10 16:23 | |
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I like the plot Insane, when is part two coming? |
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| Reply by: MrBean at Jul 16, '10 21:48 | |
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