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| Coke and Criminals | Started by: Aldo on Apr 20, '11 00:31 |
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As Tommy seen the grenade come through the window, he dived behind the diner counter as it exploded. Screams of innocent regulars peirced his ears. A few seconds after the grenade went off, Tommy stood up behind the counter to see Alonzo standing at the door. He raised his M1911 and fired off three shots before being tackled by a random truck driver who was in the diner |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 01, '11 18:26 | |
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Dazed by the grenade Aldo was kneeling by the wall, he heard two faint shots through his ringing ears and saw Alonzo in the doorway. He jumped up.
you fucksher! Littlee binch!
Aldo half stumbled, half ran to Alonzo and tackled him to the ground, now starting to regain his composure.
Tomma, go! I got the shnake!
At saying that, Alonzo punched him and stood back up, and Aldo was dazed on the ground. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 01, '11 18:30 | |
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Alonzo ducked back to cover only behind the wall only to find a police officer holding a gun to his face.
Put your hands up, ain't going to be no turf war whilst im on the beat.
Alonzo slowly began to put his guns to the floor before whipping out a third from his sock holster. He aimed and fired a bullet right in the nose of the officer making fall back on to the solid concrete. There was a second police officer who began firing but obviously had no training. .Bullets went everywhere and he couldn't handle the recoil. Alonzo fired twice, once in the chest and once in between the eyes. His family taught him well. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 18:36 | |
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(OOC: Forget that post) |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 18:42 | |
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Tommy fought off the trucker and smacked him on the head with the handle of his pistol. Looking back to the door, he saw Aldo laying unconscious on the ground.
Shit
He jumped over the counter and rushed out to Alonzo, tackling him to the ground ... |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 01, '11 18:46 | |
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Alonzo ducked hid the wall from the barrage of gunfire from Tommy only to get rugby tackled from Aldo. He squirmed his bidy around with all of his strength and punched him as hard as he could right in the bottom of the jaw. He called it the sweet spot it was an automatic ko. He picked up his gun which he droppped from the rugby tackle. He fired. *CLICK* He fired again. *CLICK* There was no blood, no nothing. Only to find that the gun jammed. He tried his other gun, *CLICK*. No bullets once again. The second gun jammed. What luck! He turned to see where Tommy was but couldn't see him in the diner, only frightened diners. He turned around for the second time and.. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 18:47 | |
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*OOMPH* Another tackle. Alonzo smacked onto the concrete floor again, but this time landed hard on his right side shattering three ribs. He felt the air rush out of him, he couldn't breathe. He tried to take a slow deep breath, but only a slow, painful wheeze came out. This must be the end Alonzo thought. A barrage of punched on his face from Tommy and he felt everything around him go black. He thought he had it all. But guess he didn't. It just wasn't his time. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 18:50 | |
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*OOMPH* Another tackle. Alonzo smacked onto the concrete floor again, but this time landed hard on his right side shattering three ribs. He felt the air rush out of him, he couldn't breathe. He tried to take a slow deep breath, but only a slow, painful wheeze came out. This must be the end Alonzo thought. A barrage of punched on his face from Tommy and he felt everything around him go black. He thought he had it all. But guess he didn't. It just wasn't his time. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 18:50 | |
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Aldo stood up, now better, and looked to tommy.
Okay, he's knocked out, lets get out of here.
Aldo pointed to a diner patron.
Call an ambulance for this man, NOW!
Aldo picked up the suitcases, walked outside, hailed a cab, and got in.
Tommy, get in, mate. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 01, '11 19:24 | |
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Tommy got in the cab and looked out at Alonzo, wheezing on the ground. He turned to the driver
Get us outa here, anywhere
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 01, '11 19:32 | |
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Aldo taps the driver on the shoulder.
Take us to the airport.
Aldo hands him a $100 bill, and the driver speeds off towards the airport and around to the landing strip. Aldo gets out and walks up to Alonzo's jet.
Tommy come on, the driver's still here, this is our ride home.
Aldo gets in and goes to the pilots chamber.
Alonzo has some extra business to take care of, he said we can take this to get home. Take us to Chicago.
Aldo stands on the entry stairs,
Tommy! Come on! Get in! |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 01, '11 20:06 | |
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5 minutes later, the paramedics came over to Alonzo. After briefly examining him they stood up and jogged to the ambulance to get the stretcher.
This guys gotta go, to the hospital A.S.A.P. otherwise we could have a cardiac arrest on our hands. His lungs are punctured and his face is barely recognisable. Whatever, this guy, he must have fucked up real bad. And I have a feeling it's not over. Think we should call the police
Nah, I hate guys like him. These guys are always killing themselves, he'll probably be dead by the end pf the week
A couple of minutes Alonzo began to stir and woke up in an ambulance with it's sirens on. He tried to get up but a sharp pain instantly made him lie back on the bed. He began to remember what happened and began to curse under his breath. With an oxygen mask on his face it sounded gibberish to the medic sitting next to him.
You should have *Deep breath* killed me. *Deep Breath* This is just the *Deep Breath* beginning. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 01, '11 21:18 | |
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Tommy got on the plane and sat in the same seat as the way into the city. He slumped back in his seat and tried to go to sleep. |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 01, '11 22:22 | |
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----------three hours later----------
The plane is coasting on the runway of Chicago Midway airport, and glides to a stop in the yards.
A voice on the intercom spouts The plane has now landed, you are now free to decompress your compartments.
Aldo steps out of the plane, and started his mercedes, which was left right where he left it.
Tommy, get in! Let's get back to HQ!
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 02, '11 21:13 | |
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Alonzo wakes up again but instead of in a hospital he's in a dark room with a dim lightbulb hanging over his head. There two men standing on either side of a the door. One was holding a metal baseball bat whereas the other was holding a solid crowbar. His feet were tied and his arm was in a sling, he couldn't make any sudden movements the pain was too much. His chest was wrapped in a white bandage and he was half-naked. He could just about keep his right eye open. His left eye was completely shut, from Tommy's beating and he was struggling to breathe. He began to panic. He remembered being in a situation like this as a kid. When he got kidnapped for taking one of the local kids bike. They wanted to scare him but now, he wasn't so sure.
His boss walked in to the room along with his RHM, again, and pulled up a chair and sat right infront of him. He took out a cigar, lit it, and took one, looong pull. A couple of seconds later and he blew it right in Alonzo's face.
So..
His boss started off, staring right into Alonzo's face, his eyes glaring and face wanting to rip off everypart of his body but yet it also showed a calm side of him. That was the scary thing.
I hear you've been through a lot of shit Today.
Alonzo, barely looked up, his energy was at a complete low, his hunger was unbearable and the last time he had a drink was atleast yesterday.
*Deep breath* You could say that again
Alonzo began to chuckle like he always did but ended up spurting out blood on his boss's shoes. His boss looked at his shoes, stared at them and looked back up at Alonzo.
Do that again, imma rip off ya head. Where's the rest of me money? Only 'alf was recovered.
They took it..
Who's they?
That family, from chicago. Aldo and Tommy and his crew. *Deep breath*
His boss stood up, flinging the chair to the other side and screaming in the air, He walked back over to Alonzo and carried on interrogating him.
SO, WHERE'S MY FUCKIN' COKE THEN?
His boss calmed down and sat back down on the chair that his RHM brought back.
Don't tell me they took that aswell, eh?
Alonzo didn't know what to say, so he gave a cheap nod.
So they rushed you aswell, after using my fuckin' plane. They take MY money and MY coke.
Alonzo began to hear DEJA VU in what his boss was saying, but didn't wanna tell him.
Ya know, Alonzo. Your a good kid. You've still got a long life ahead of you. But you've fucked up too many a times.
He stood up and walked to the door.
No hard feelings, eh?
Alonzo, tried to shout. But the pain was too much, he looked up to the sky and began to remember his family who were sitting at him waiting for him. And then imagined what the police were going to say to them. His wife knew it was coming one day, but.. not.. this soon. As soon as the boss left the room and closed the door, the goons at the door looked at each-other and walked towards their prey. Before, swinging their weapons up and clamping it down on as heard as they could on Alonzo's head. Blood splattered everywhere, a bit of a chipped bone went into the goons mouth. But they, carried on hitting him, again. And again. And again. Until they could no more bare the sight. This was how Alonzo's chapter ended. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 02, '11 21:41 | |
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This was how Alonzo thought his chapter ended.
Two gunshots and two guards dropped. A masked assailant, came over and untied Alonzo. Everything was a blur, he could barely stay awake. His head was heavily bleeding. He heard a tear, and felt a soft blanket being wrapped around his head. The masked saviour crouched down and began speaking. Alonzo, couldn't make it out. He was dying. His head felt like it was being crushed even from the blanket. He then made out, a bunch of breasts and curved hips. So it was a female that saved him. No, no I must be hallucinating. Until she pushed a note into his trouser pocket and he saw a pink brooch with sister on it.. She lifted him up on his shoulders and carried him out to a car in the underground parking. Alonzo looked around and noticed that it was his hideout he used for interrogations. The cheek of it. It wasn;t until now that Alonzo questioned the short woman's strength. She lied him on to the back passenger side, and gently closed the door skimming his toes. She walked round to the drivers side, turned on the engine and screeched the hell outta there.
Imma take you to a friend I know, he should patch you up. He owns a private clinic so eveythings there, don't you worry.
Alonzo, thought the voice to be familiar but was too tired to think. He suddenly felt like conking out, the chairs suddenly felt soo comfortable. He closed his eyes and wandered about in his dreams. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 02, '11 22:44 | |
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Tommy got in the car and looked at Aldo
Alright, lets go
Aldo sped off out of the airport and a short time later were parking up, outside the Hybrids HQ |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 06, '11 23:47 | |
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Ok, finally...
Aldo steps out of his coupe and walks into the HQ, he walks to the garage and sees three dead bodies on the ground.
Shit, Tommy, get in here! |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 07, '11 00:04 | |
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Tommy runs into the garage
What the fuck ... Alonzo's guys I bet, who the hell else would it be. What are they here for? |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 07, '11 00:14 | |
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For the cash.
Aldo goes to the truck and pulls out two suitcases. He pops them open and shows them to Tommy, who stares at the wads of money.
See, we could've had a lot more of that, but instead, we have a little bit of that, and all our coke. Hey you.
The snoozing driver, now awakened, looks up at Aldo.
There are two cases in the trunk of my roadster, go get them, take them to my office.
Aldo pats Tommy on the shoulder.
See my friend, it all turned out well. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 07, '11 00:41 | |
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