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Coke and Criminals Started by: Aldo on Apr 20, '11 00:31

Tommy ponders for a few short seconds on Aldo's last words

For everyone except the platoon of fed's at that warehouse, Alonzo who's probably laying dead in a swamp and for basically everyone who got tossed in our way. But yeah, all turned out well. And the worst is yet to come. We still gotta explain to Fernando what happened...

Tommy walked into the HQ and headed down to the bar for a much needed drink

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I take it that I'll tell him then...

Aldo frowns, walks over to his bosses office and steps in.

Don Torres...

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Nando is in his HQ filling in paperwork for a new business when he sees Aldo looking quite sheepish and nervous. He puts his pen down and looks at Aldo in a confusing manner.

Hi Aldo, by then look of your face i can tell something is bothering you, don't need to be a genius to work that out. Spit it out friend, tell me what the problem is.

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Aldo stands in front of his boss, on the other side of his desk, and tells him the events of the past couple of days.

Well, me and Tom had a coke deal set up with some goons down in New Orleans. Well, the deal started out good, then we find out that the snitch belonged to the thugs and then we went to Vegas... Well, we were attacked by someone who was after money, which turned out to be OUR cocaine, in THEIR trunk. But then, we decided to go back, the other guy, with the buyers, he turned psycho and attacked us, we... disabled him. He should be still breathing.

He nervously plays with his watch.

Well, the end result is that we got away with all of our coke... And I snagged two suitcases of cash. Well, I don't know how you'll view this, but yeah, that's the news.

Aldo looks at Don Torres, waiting for his judgement.

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Nando listens to what Aldo had to say and smiled.

Well the main thing here is that you're all ok. You done the right thing in defending yourself and at least you still have the goods, plus some extra cash. So that's a bonus. these things happen my friend, you just need to be more careful with who you are dealing with, there are too many rats out there quite happy to stab you in the back just to make a quick buck.

As for the guy you have disabled, keep an eye out for him, if you happen to cross his path again then give him the slip. We can't tolerate people like him trying to do us over now can we?

Nando lights up a cigarette and relaxes in his chair.

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Aldo grins.

Trust me sir, he shouldn't be bothering me.  Not in a bad way, at least, It's all under control.

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Nando nods his head

That's good then. Good job.

I mush shoot off now anyway, i have business that needs to be taken care of at my diner. Damn delivery guys are never on time!

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Ha, ain't that the truth.

Aldo walks out and goes to his office. He walks in, hangs up his coat and hat, then he sits at his desk. He props his legs up and falls asleep after a long days work.

 

END

This RP was brought to you by the many businesses of Chicago and New Orleans, Alonzo, Tommy_Carroll, and I. Not to forget Melien and my own boss, Fernando_Torres.

We all accept donations to the RP cause, so if you enjoyed this, feel free to lighten your pockets.

Feel free to post your critiques on this thread. We WANT to hear your opinion.

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I have been keeping tabs on this RP over the last few weeks and have been mightily impressed with how it has been maintained and played out by everyone involved. I don't quite remember a story going on so long and getting so much attention. I am glad i got a small part at the end there, thanks!

Great job to you, Tommy, Melien and Alonzo. Fantastic effort and i very much look forward to seeing the next instalment from you.

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I almost forgot!

Nando opens his wallet and donates 100k to each member. He tips his hat and floats away.

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I want to congratulate eveyone that was involved in this RP of ours. Yes it was fun, a lot of hard work and planning went into this, but it turned out really well. There will be many more RP's coming out after this one, so keep an eye out people. Oh and thanks for the donation, Fernando, i'm sure the others appreciate it, I know that I did. :D 

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