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| Redemption | Started by: Aldo on May 11, '11 21:10 |
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Alonzo looks up to see two men enter the room. He starts to yell, but all they hear is the his muffled voice from the gag. He recognized the men. Tommy and Aldo, the men from the drug deal. The front man whispers something into the womans ear and she leaves. The man, Aldo walks up and pulls the gag out of Alonzo's mouth.
What the fuck is going on here! Why the fuck are you psychos doing this to me!
He slaps alonzo with the back of his hand, and Alonzo silences.
Listen you punk, if it wasn't for us, you'd be dead! Now listen.
Aldo pulls up a chair and sits down.
You're a good kid, not too bright, but still. You didn't deserve to die.
The woman walks back in, looks at Aldo and nods.
Okay kid, you are in luck, the senator of Louisiana is willing to do us a favor, if you do me and Tommy one. What's the most risky thing you can imagine?
A bank robbery?
Exactly. We bust this place, and give him a cut, hopefully he'll get you on good terms with your boss. So are you in or out.
Aldo extends his hand, but pulls it back when he realizes that Alonzo's tied up.
I'm in. Now get these ropes off, please.
The woman cuts the ropes and they all stand.
Hey, stay in the HQ, okay babe.
They walk into Aldo's office and hi picks up his phone. He called multiple contacts, and told them about the bank job, and wanting to see if they were in.
Well, now we wait for anyone who's want to join us.
Aldo looks to Alonzo.
So why were you going to get killed, anyway? |
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Alonzo was still in shock and awe at what just happened. The memory he had of these two men was when they punched him up and left him for dead. And now, they saved him. Just didn't make any sense. I'll ask him later, he thought.
Well, remember, that time at the warehouse. When I busted in, trying to get the money and ended up being left for dead by you two, for the first time, not to mention that time near the cafe. Well, I made a deal with the boss, if I fucked up at the drug deal then he was going t, you know, terminate my contract. Well, you remember the rest.
Alonzo began to sit comfortably on the wooden chaird he was on. The woman just finished untying his legs, and backed up next to Aldo. He gave a wink to her and noticed a little smile crawl on to her face.
So my turn to ask a question. Why? Why rescue me, after we tried to kill each other. And how do you know I won't kill you, the first time I lay my hands on a weapon?
He crossed one leg over the other and folded his arms, awaiting an anwer from one of the two men. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 12, '11 16:19 | |
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Aldo escorted the two into his office, and they sat down, Alonzo on the opposite side. Aldo opens the drawer and pulls out a .38 revolver.
Well, now I will know.
He drops the .38 on the desk in front of Alonzo.
I did it because you didn't deserve to die, you're a good kid, not too bright, but a good kid. You're helping us rob a bank. So are my accomplices and Tommy, if they show up. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 12, '11 21:09 | |
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Alonzo, threw the gun back into Aldo's lap. Every part of him, wanted to kill him, but hey he did rescue him.
Look, imma need a couple of guys of my own, I ain't gonna be by myself again. Imma make a couple of calls and get a couple of my good people. And yo, buy me some new threads, you guys fucked up my favourite one.
Alonzo sat back in the reclining chair and playing around with an ornament on Aldo's desk. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 12, '11 21:15 | |
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Aldo took a sip from his flask and laughs.
What guys, you're no one now, you're with us on this job, you're practically dead. That's why we're doing this.
He throws a $5 bill onto Alonzo's lap.
buy a t-shirt off of the religious people, it's the depression, shouldn't be that hard. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 12, '11 21:18 | |
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Alonzo picked up the $5 dollar bill, scrunched it up, and threw it right into Aldo's face.
Hey, hey, just cause you saved me from the boss, don't mean you can treat me like scum you bastard. And don't you worry about the guys i'm getting, these guys are hardcore pro's, not in a family, families hire them. Just so happens, they were in the army with me a couple of years back. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 12, '11 21:22 | |
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After the bill was thrown at his face, he became irritated. He stood up.
Listen to me you poor fuck! I demand respect from you because if it wan't for me you'd have half of a skull in the Mississippi Fucking Delta!
Aldo pressed his suit, and sits back down, he exhales deeply.
Fine, who are their names, if they come. I'd like to know who I'm working with. And what were you, Army, Air Force, Navy, marines, Intelligence and spying? |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 12, '11 21:27 | |
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Alonzo gritted his teeth and slowly grinded them in clock-wise rotation. He took a deep breath and exhaled for as long as he can. Normally, if someone other than his boss and his RHM spoke to him like that, they usually ended up being sent in pieces to their mothers home. However, at the moment, he needed Aldo. And decided to calm down.
You've got some balls, i'll tell ya that for nut'm.
Alonzo, began to look up and remember the times where he spent most of his life along with some of his closest mates.
Me I was with the marines for 13 years. When something happened back home, which made me end my career with the marines for life. Now, right now, i've got a couple of people in mind. Imma try to get in contact with them, if they agree, i'll tell you. But I can give out their names, just yet. Hope you understand |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 12, '11 21:43 | |
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Aldo takes out a piece of paper and a pencil.
Write down the names. I'll do a background check.
Aldo slides the paper and pencil to Al. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 12, '11 21:47 | |
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Alonzo began to get reaaaaalllyyy annoyed at the cockiness being shown from Aldo. He felt the blood rush to his head, and felt like he was going to explode. He shot up, which sent the chair he was sitting in, flying in the opposite direction.
Look ya son of a bitch, I already told ya, i'm not giving out their names until I know for sure that their willing to accept. Then when I have a list of the people who are willing to join us on our little escapade then i'll let you do ya fancy 'background check'. Do you understand, what i'm saying?
Alonzo, walked over to his chair, put it upright and slid it back to it's place. He straightened his jacket and sat down. His temper slowly dying down. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 12, '11 21:53 | |
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Tommy came walking into the office from the bathroom to see Aldo and Alonzo almost ready to bout. Tommy walked to the side of Aldo's desk, reached across and smacked Aldo across the back of his head. Aldo looked at him in awe
This man is your guest, you treat him with respect. No matter how he treats you, even with the ... rough, history we have.
Tommy walks to the corner of the office and pours himself a small glass of whiskey from a crystal bottle he bought Aldo as a promotion gift, he pours a second for Alonzo.
Now, as far as I know we're robbing a bank. Who what where why and how is what I wanna know. |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 12, '11 22:35 | |
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Aldo stares at Tommy in awe, then he recovers and grins.
I saved this man's life. I COULD force him to be my servant, I could leave him dead in lake Michigan, but no, I'm helping him earn money, and earn back his life... Speaking of that...
Aldo looks at Al.
Your boss probably thinks that you're dead, my woman took care of the bodies, so you are now dead, to everything and everyone excapt me, you, Tommy, and my girl. So what do you think of that? Not so aggressive now, knowing that you could... Disappear, per se, and no one would even know. |
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| Reply by: Aldo at May 13, '11 02:18 | |
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Bag was walking on the alley of Aldo's office as he had to organized a crime which lacked people. He had already heard familiar voices of people who seemed to be arguing over something. He recognized one of the voices as Aldo, and another who had a pretty calm voice to be Tommy. There was an unfamiliar voice which he could not identify.
It wasn't long until he reached the door of the office. It was closed at that time, and from the sound of it, it seems things inside there were pretty nasty, but he really needed people for the crime he had to do, which was to sabotage a rival gang's business, and so he had no choice but to give a gentle knokck at the door, hopefully whatever shit is happening inside cool down . Within seconds, he sees an unexpected face openign the door. It was Tommy.
As he walked into the office, he could see that aldo was furious by the looks on his face. From what he picked up from the conversation he heard earlier as he waas walking to Aldo's office, he had a small clue of what was going on.
" Well I gues it was the wrong time, but anyways, I need a favor. We've got some serious yet rewarding business to do. I need a couple of people with me. Anyone interested?"
Tommy gave Bag a look that he would be better off leaving.
" Well then, I think I shall leave. But anyways, sorry but i accidentally eavesdropping due to the volume of your voices here, but I've got to agree with Tommy that You have got to treat your guest with respect, doesn't matter if you saved his life or something. "
Aldo still looking angry, after Bag had said that.
" I guess this would calm him down" thought Bag as he walked towards aldo, turned 90 degrees to his left, and as he was turning he jumped and grabbed Aldo's head while falling forward, performing a R.K.O.
" Oh yeah take that Aldo, well sorry i had to do that, but if you remembered, qutie a while back, you told me that if you ever went into anger I'm allowed to hit you or do anything. And well, see ya round people."
Bag left the office leaving Aldo on the ground, who was getting up onto his feet durign that time |
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| Reply by: The_Punching_Bag at May 13, '11 10:27 | |
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Alonzo was confused at what just happened. A man he has never seen in his life, casually walked into Aldo's office,R.KO'd him and walked out like nothing happened. This was the second time, Aldo was hit for disrespecting Alonzo. Well, suits him right, the arrogant bastard.
"Hey mate, you might wanna stick around for a while, I think we'll be needing guys like you. That's all i'm saying for now. If, Tommy and Aldo agree they can fill you in." |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 13, '11 17:29 | |
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Maestro just got out of the shower, while drying his hair with a towel, he picked up his phone, noticed 38 messages, 34 saying "my description to gay magaz....." anyway the other 4 was from Alonzo, he needs me pronto, so i run out to mi car a go ninety, do a hand-braker turn back, go back in the house, put some clothes on finally after the shower, hop back into the car, go to this run down gaff, find the entrance... "aw Alonzo are you ok?, Yea, but i need your help on something... (explains the situation) ...Really? he just came in and smacked Aldo and went out again ha, anyway yeah bro, im gonn'a help you on this one, you can count on me!!" by the way what are we packing?? |
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| Reply by: LaMaestro at May 13, '11 22:09 | |
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Half An hour earlier
Alonzo stood up and as he got to the door..
Yo Tommy, where's the payphone again?
Go straight, turn on your first right and should be just there. Don't go wandering off though, otherwise Aldo's gonna go into another bitch fit.
Alonzo, turned the handle and followed tommy's instructions. He picked up the phone and dialled one of his closest mates numbers. After 4 unsuccessful attempts LaMaestro picked up.
Yo I need you, bro. But you can't tell anyone, where your going and who your going to meet. If anyone asks, just say your going around town to splash some cash. And I mean it, Maestro. Meet me at, £$$%£$%"£$% "£$%"£$%"£, ok you got that. Oright then mate, i'll see you sson then. And bring no-one. Tell no-one. This is some serious shit.
Alonzo, called up as many people as he could from the top his head. And now just waited to see who would turn up.
Half an hour later and LaMaestro, turned up in a banged out 1920's ford car. Grey smoke was seeping from the bonnet and it kept stopping and starting. Good thing the kid can shoot straight, though Alonzo though. Infact, LaMaestro, turns out to be one of the best sharpshooters New Orleans has to offer. Not to mention he was a captain, in the marines. Alonzo stepped out into the cold, and closed the door behind him, where he waited to tell LaMaestro, the story.
Yo, so you see why I need you. At this moment in time, I barely have any info, on what bank were raiding, what guns were using. None of that. All of that will be sorted in due time. However the main reason I called you was to find out if your in or if your out. So, your call, mate. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 13, '11 22:25 | |
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"man, we were in Budapest together, i'm with you man!" "now wheres this aldo fella, i wanna give him a smack for be so disrespectly... everyone else is doing it?!" anyway, ok man, will you go out to my car, in the trunk i brought some "supplies" for the job, oh and don't mi Jimmy "The Snitch", he has an apple in his mouth, and before you close the booth make sure all his arms and legs are tucked in... no seriously there all over the place, dont let them fall out!"
Maestro then turns to the men, "so is this all there is?" ok, Alonzo, what you get? |
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| Reply by: LaMaestro at May 13, '11 22:36 | |
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Alonzo smiles at Aldo and knew that he could rely on him. This kid was fulla energy ever since since he joined the regiment and although he has the mentality of a child sometimes even Alonzo hates it when he gets mad.
Thanks man, and go say hello to the men, in the room. Make sure you tell them I sent you, otherwise, Aldo might try pull a fast one on you. I'll go see what kinda shit you've brought.
LaMaestro looked at him at confused.
Ya think i'm scared of them punks, I thought you knew me better Alonzo.
LaMaestro, opened the door, and stepped into the old warehouse. Meanwhile, Alonzo walked over to the car, and opened the boot of the car.
Jesus, LaMaestro ya sommamabitch. Shiiiit! That kid sure doesn't have a lot of mercy does he.
Alonzo, plucked his nose with his thumb and index finger to stop the smell from penetrating his sense of smell. And found a large rucksack. He opened the zip, to find a bunch of sex toys and paddings within the bag.
MAESTRO! MAESTRO! Get your ass over here, man.
Maestro, opened the large door of the warehouse and ran over to Alonzo to find out what the problem was.
What, what happened!
Maestro asked. Alonzo showed the contents, to Maestro before bursting out in laughter.
What the fuck's this?
Alonzo asked, still unable to hold his composure. Maestro, snatched the bag, from Alonzo and threw it back in the boot.
That's, that's not mine. I swear... What, come on Alonzo, like I would carry shit like that in the bck of my car. Even I would know to keep that at home.
Whatever, man! Let's get inside and introduce you to the guys, it's freezing out here and i've only a got a t-shirt on. |
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| Reply by: Alonzo at May 13, '11 22:48 | |
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Ok, hang on, i gott'a eh, check something be right in there Maestro said! |
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| Reply by: LaMaestro at May 13, '11 23:09 | |
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Tommy looked stangly at Alonzo's associate. He couldn't understand a word he was saying
Alright, so we have four guys for the job. Five if Bag comes back. It's enough but we could still use some extra hands. I'll search around, see who I can find. So what's the plan for it, do we have blueprints or ... any information at all?
Tommy sat down in a large black leather couch at the other side of the office, keeping an eye on the new guy
What did you say your name was? |
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| Reply by: Tommy_Carroll at May 13, '11 23:22 | |
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