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The Long Island Enquirer - Issue VI | Started by: Solastalgia on Nov 22, '12 07:34 |
"What kind of bullshit is this?" a voice incredulously shot through the air of a seemingly vacant building overlooking Long Island. Overgrown grass, a rusted gate and a faded sign were all that remained to the world in reminder of what stood there years ago; the Great Depression had taken its toll on New York, and the headquarters of the out-of-print Long Island Enquirer was certainly no exception. Spending several years in a Peruvian prison didn't help the cause, either - nor did the mass murder of most of his writers after a military man took exception to being called "hipster" in passing. As profitable as the Long Island Enquirer was in its heyday, the press was, for all intensive purposes - literal and metaphorical - dead.
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No. I won't. |
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Reply by: AmphibiousWhale at Nov 22, '12 09:11 | |
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Governor, taking a stroll through the streets, comes across a stack of papers labeled 'The Long Island Enquirer'.
Reading through it, smirks are commonly seen and chuckles freely given, as Governor always enjoyed decent pieces of satire.
Satisfied with what he read, he takes a copy with him, eager to recommend it to fellow readers.
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Reply by: Governor at Nov 22, '12 20:03 | |
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WhereWasWadeWilson quickly notices the paper,
Good attempt mate. Next time try putting something funny in it so the best laugh isn't when you call it a piece written in fiction, jest and satire. You almost had me laughing when you brought up the Anonymous Godfather but instead of writing actual fictional comedy you just wrote bulk quantity boredom and let my hopes down. Quality over quantity mate, you're supposed to be a writer not a manufacturing plant manager when you write papers. That being said, I can assume you thought you were selling/making paper like you do at Dunder Mifflin rather than writing a news paper, so I can't wait to see how your next one turns out when you actually focus on the humor and quality. If the next one doesn't turn out very well either might I suggest the following edition be on a subject you have a better understanding of because this paper clearly proved you don't understand comedy.
Oh and yes the only reason I read this rubbish was because I was told you criticized me but not for the reason you probably believe. I love constructive criticism and was looking forward to it because you never know when something will help you identify a real flaw, but you can't even be bothered to put a decent effort into it (I assume it's your attempt at criticism because it wasn't funny, hurtful, intelligent or whatever it was you were attempting to do so I decided to call it criticism like the man who mailed me) so clearly you were just looking to fill space in your already bulk quantity filled joke of a paper. Believe me when I say I'd love for your next paper to actually be funny because this place is so much better when the streets are lively and filled with quality writers, but don't mind me doubting you can accomplish that. |
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Reply by: WhereWasWadeWilson at Nov 23, '12 06:56 | |
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I should probably mention off of the bat, that if you see me referring to another user as a "blubbering sea ham", that I'm probably not being serious in a piece. Rather than see this as what it was originally intended for, you've seemed to have mistaken me for someone who made a half-hearted attempt at criticism when the center piece was focused neither on you, nor the blubbering sea ham that has also managed to rear its massive head in our corner of the streets this morning. |
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Reply by: Solastalgia at Nov 23, '12 11:14 | |
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Right, well the joke wasn't funny at all if that's what it was supposed to be so I had to assume it was something. Next time make it actually funny so I can assume it's a joke and not just a critique written by a guy who recently borrowed LaMueta's crayons to write his "paper". The problem with claiming to not be serious, is you actually have to be funny and you had no comedy whatsoever in this entire rag. You also skipped my bit that it was only thrown in there to bulk more quantity in this shit rag, why was it added?
Oh, and that piece I wrote that you mentioned was written quickly due to time restraints and if you were smart enough to figure out the first clue (which clearly you weren't as you decided to go after that) it would be blatantly obvious it has far more quality than this rag. It was a logic puzzle competition you nitwit, read the last comment and you'll understand why it had lots of quality content if you were smart enough to figure out the first puzzle you just insulted. On top of that, those previously mentioned time restraints were due to outside factors (Hurricane Sandy) and if not for them I would've written twice as much for each part of that competition. Everyone who figured out clue number one loved that puzzle and many more came to me looking for the answers because they genuinely enjoy logic puzzles. Most of whom were CLs and hands, but hell what would they know. I mean you've got an Earner backing your piece so clearly you had a wonderful showing.
As for other quality content, if you're not even smart enough to ask around about who I am then you're not worth my time because not very long ago these streets were littered with my comments and threads. I've been asked many times to start writing again because the streets have become far too serious but quite frankly I have not chosen my new focal point for my actually funny jokes so I won't. Nothing funnier has come to mind than the scouse monkeys and slapping Fozzie and the Frenchwoman around so I just don't have any inspiration to try. When the time and inspiration come, you'll see me out here with something that makes people laugh with an almost childish presentation that will get people going with back and forth jokes again. In the mean time, try to figure out how to write a paper people can read that's actually funny because these streets are far too serious. |
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Reply by: WhereWasWadeWilson at Nov 23, '12 19:10 | |
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Quite frankly, I could care less who your father or grandfather was in a previous life, Mr. WIlson, if your brief time in this life as a Goomba is giving the impression of a bitter relic from an age that is no longer relevant to these days. |
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Reply by: Solastalgia at Nov 23, '12 19:48 | |
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I personally enjoyed the read. While it was littered with jokes throughout the pieces it was still humorous, and I appreciate the overall satire of the paper. |
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Reply by: Toby at Nov 23, '12 19:50 | |
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Toby, I may just have to take advantage of that offer. I'll send for some immediately; The Calamari is due to go to press shortly. We're rather proud to say that we have formed something of an alliance with The Long Island Enquirer due to the sheer magnificence of its editor. |
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Reply by: LilacDelaney at Nov 23, '12 19:58 | |
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Ember skitters to the news stand like a little girl awaiting her first swing dance lesson. She runs her fingertips along the top copy of The Long Island Enquirer and lets out a small shriek of excitement. |
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Reply by: Ember at Nov 23, '12 20:05 | |
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Toby takes out a notepad and a pen. |
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Reply by: Toby at Nov 23, '12 20:07 | |
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You brought my father's work into this, sir. So once you open that door you open each and every one of my fore-fathers' work so great work there bud. Way to remember your own positions you took in this discussion. I wasn't being a bitter, I was responding to your response, but way to pay attention to your own response.
Again, the joke wasn't funny and I only responded because the joke/critique wasn't funny at all and left me questioning why you put it in at all. It's not grief, and it's not my job to hold your hand when you fail at joking about me in the streets. I'm a mean guy lately and if you did your homework you'd know to talk to me before using my name for anything unless it was quality work because I enjoy making people who misuse my name squirm. Once you bring my name out here it's not my responsibility to take the conversation out of the streets. The problem with your failed jokes that you might not understand is those "poems" are spam and he seriously needs to stop.
Oh, and I'll pick my words nicely when you don't spam yourself. If you read my initial comment, it wasn't the comment that caused me to respond. It was the fact that you didn't take the time to make the part about me funny and you used my name to lengthen your paper. If you're that desperate for content go elsewhere because I won't sit quietly while my name is being used for lengthening purposes with no real effort because you can't think of anything better to write.
Oh and my apologies for the mean man words, next time I'll just have to say "terrible write" instead of "shit rag" and I'm not sure what to call someone who can't even figure out it was the first clue to my old puzzle and then tries to imply I'm not smart enough to write quality pieces other than nitwit, so I guess I could have just laughed and said "I'm not sure what to call someone who brings up part of my old puzzle, can't even figure out it was the first clue to my old puzzle and then tries to imply I'm not smart enough to write quality pieces when you could have saved yourself the embarrassment by quick checking the following responses in the piece you picked out to scrutinize."
Oh and my intention was to tell you not to put my name in a paper without my consent. If you do, I want it to be quality and not just used for lengthening spam. How am I doing so far? |
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Reply by: WhereWasWadeWilson at Nov 23, '12 20:28 | |
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Kittie bought a few dozen copies to sleep under in the harsh weather seeing as her newly dead mother had been killed so suddenly and unexpectedly that she had never been able to set up a proper will. She folded up several sheets and stuffed them with wads of paper for a makeshift pillow, then curled up behind the newsstand to try to stay warm. |
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Reply by: KittieCapone at Nov 24, '12 08:32 | |
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