... THE END

Thats all folks!!!

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just to make sure yhey were dead he shot them..................................................................twice

What was the point of ruining my story?

ah it was just a bit of fun anyway EM ruined it i never said they died

You provoked him, how is ruining my work fun?

well you said it was pointless sure start a new one if its bothering you so much

I shouldnt have to, Your should respect that we were in the middle of a story and left it alone.

i only added a comment

A comment in the middle of a story wrecks the flow and invites others to do the same. It ruined the story and now I have to start again.

sure why did you start a post if you didnt want people to comment on it

now you have a sequel we are all waiting for what the new pointless tale has to offer

I wanted quality replies not pathetic childish comments.

McKnighter sighs, it's going to be a long drive. As McKnighter shifts into gear, two hobo's with slurred speech walk around in the middle of the road, yelling at the car. McKnighter tried to stop, he really did, but ended up hitting them at 10 miles per hour. They fly across the roof of the car, cursing and yells inaudible words. McKnighter quickly hammers on the gas, not wanting to add more of a bounty on their heads.

"So TBK, which way we going?"

Driving near the car of the old croon , she saw that TBK is mumbling something........she honks her car to Knighty to get his attention.

Hey Old man! I think your lady friend have bump her head, she is mumbling something while her eyes are close, better put her in the safe house or hospital!

She drives alongside them now, as she touch her gun by her side. Its the gun of her mom back then.

I'm going to interrupt this story one more time, just to say that if you publically release a story such as this, it is for the public to comment on or add to as they wish. If you don't wish for the public to interrupt your story, don't improvise it on the streets. You can make your speech down the backalley. Problem solved.

TBK thinks hard and long. This is truely a devistating problem. Theres no north and south on the map. Which one was up again? She couldnt decide so she flipped a coin. Heads. South was up.

She was somewhat aware of a female voice talking nearby, and she opened her eyes and looked over. Driving dreadfully close to them was the woman who stole their car, and she was still driving it.

"Mck, watch out." She said even though his attention was already on it.

McKnighter cupped his mouth and called back,

"Can I have my car back yet? This one is pretty beat up."

The taxi had bullet holes in the sides and back, the windows were either broken or riddled with holes. The inside was a mess, cotton everywhere.

I had just come from robbing a warehouse and was driving a large moving truck when i spotted my man McKnighter and TBK with a couple other people on the side of the road near a broken down cab.  I pulled up beside them and said "Hey man, pull your car in the back and everyone climb in, we'll hide you well with this get up.  And this large tank is re enforced for bullets and has an engine the size of my living room".  I push a button and a ramp slides down the back so the car can enter, and the back slides open.  "I even have fresh weapons and ammo boss", I say with a wink.

McKnighter smirked.

"That's a pretty small living room."

McKnighter climbs out of the taxi and waves for jade to bring his car into the truck. He wasn't about to pay for gas when someone wanted to give him a ride outta here.