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How does this story end? Started by: JoeyBagaDonuts on Aug 30, '11 02:44

C again.

It's not really his time to make an outburst or provide a bond. She's a moll, not a wife. And he shouldn't be angry in public. He should spend his time contemplating what he'll do.

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B B B B B B B B B B B B
B please
Thank you

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I like the shorter. But because they are shorter doesn't really change quality. It gives the people more of a chance to navigate the story. But because they are shorter doesn't mean that they are worse. Just saying.

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man shold have a newsletter for this! haha

 

well A definitely./ they might have sex.

 

B might get him in trouble, C would be best. bu nah i'm goign with A:D

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Joey stood there listening to the crowd shout out their thoughts about the story and then he realized that there was no clear victor yet, even worse, this time he had all three options chosen and not being able to flip a coin he was at a loss as to how to decide to go on from here ... perhaps this might do the trick ...

Joey stepped up to introduce his idea to the masses,

"I have come to the decision that whomever can bring forth a request accompanied by a reason for which path to follow that hasn't posted in this weeks addition will be the deciding vote, so hurry up run on up here and declare you choice!"

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B)      Joey says, “You really don’t know me at all then, and how could you, your just as bad as the rest of them you let Lorenzo rule your life more than any man working for him, your just a dumb whore!”

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~B~ and the story continues…

Angered at what Mary had to say Joey grabbed Mary firmly by the back of the next and angrily spoke back into her ears,

“You really don’t know me at all then, and how could you, your just as bad as the rest of them you let Lorenzo rule your life more than any man working for him, your just a dumb whore!”

He then let go of her, Mary slapped him across the face and stormed out.

Joey sat back down to calm himself down and finished his coffee, grabbed his coat, and then walked out of the restaurant.

He stepped outside to the hotel bar to have a smoke and a drink even though it was early he was in the mood.

It occurred to him that perhaps he really didn’t know where to start with this, should he get back to Tom at the restaurant and find out what he knows about all of this, or perhaps would it be best to start trying to work alone. If he spent too much time around the casino Eddie would most likely begin to get suspicious and that wouldn’t be good news.

One thing he did know was that he was getting fed up with Mary but she was probably the one that knew the situation the best after what happened he’d have to find a new mark, somebody else close to Eddie that he would be able to squeeze information from if he had to.

He pulled out his money clip slapped a few bills on the counter of the bar to take care of the tab and tip and then …

What does Joey do next?

A)     Joey walks into the casino looking for Eddie to see if he’s making any further considerations and perhaps offer to take him out and have a private business meet.

B)      Joey heads into the restaurant to make a few deliveries just like any other day and tries to get some advice from Tom.

C)      Joey heads over to the casino to see if he can get close to any of Eddie’s associates that might be able to get him the information he needs faster, without having to deal with Eddie personally.

(In case of a tie first response wins this time, otherwise majority vote rule like usual)

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B. Joey continues as normal, you shouldn;t be  too eager, and one of Eddies guy's might tell him.

 

B

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I like C but I like A too
Which one is better there is only one way to find out

FIGHT!


Okay C wins the fight so I going for C


C)Joey heads over to the casino to see if he can get close to any of Eddie's associates that might be able to get him the information he needs faster, without having to deal with Eddie personally.

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grrr. tie and only two voters... More people should be able to put their input in on this great story...

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C)Joey heads over to the casino to see if he can get close to any of Eddie's associates that might be able to get him the information he needs faster, without having to deal with Eddie personally.

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~C~

Joey walked out of the hotel and decided perhaps he should go ahead and pay a visit to the casino to check things out.

It probably wasn’t time already to meet with Eddie in an official capacity but this time perhaps he could get a little leisure time in at the tables.

Joey walked up to the top floor by Eddie’s office and back towards the VIP gaming rooms.

In the room he noticed that there was a table with seven card stud in the middle and a huge group of spectators watching huge amounts of money exchange hands.

Joey worked his way up to the table and noticed four gentlemen and a lady at the table. It appeared that two of the men were going head to head all in and about to draw their final cards.

Before the dealer placed the cards down he looked up at Joey and said,

“You that new kid right, Eddie been expecting you around here, why don’t you take a seat and Ill have one of the waitresses here bring you come complimentary chips.”

Normally Joey wouldn’t be  the kind to indulge himself but he couldn’t help but feel compelled to play a few rounds of Poker, besides the women at the table was extremely gorgeous the kind that might get Eddies attention, but it would be a lie to say that those were the first thoughts that crossed his mind after see her. She was wearing a deep blue dress and blue eyes to match, bright blond hair and big red lips, everything about her was perfect.

The women was low on her lucky and Joey decided he would sit next to her, he sat down pulled out a cigarette and a light offering it to her, she looked right back at him and said nothing, and waited.

“You going to do something with that cigarette or do you think it’s going to smoke itself she said and smiled flirtatiously back at Joey.”

Joey placed the cigarette in between the lush red lips and struck his match and gave her a light.

Perhaps if Joey played his cards right he might get lucky tonight after all …

What happens next …

A)     Joey starts to win big at the poker table and remains there the rest of the night trying to put together information on the guests.

 

B)      Joey works on flirting with this new women in hopes of returning back to a hotel room with her

 

C)      Joey makes polite conversation with the women to try and find out if she knows anything useful about Eddie or if she might help him with his mission.

 

(ooc) Thank you very much Jason for helping out this week and being the tie breaking vote, to be honest I will try to hold out until at least 3 people give an opinion each time before writing the next section of the story.

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B again B

B) Joey works on flirting with this new women in hopes of returning back to a hotel room with her

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A

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B

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A

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