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21 and a half days (Sequel to 10 days) | Started by: b7gangster on Oct 26, '09 16:44 |
Dude, Enzo is crazy! That was sooo unexpected. |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 12, '09 08:28 | |
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Prison can make people insane |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 12, '09 11:02 | |
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Tom nods in agreement to them both. The story just took a crazy twist. I couldn't see that coming. And I am wondering how they'll get out of the prison. And Prison can make you go crazy. I almost went crazy when I sat in prison before after getting caught buying some drugs. |
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Reply by: Tom_Hagen at Dec 12, '09 11:30 | |
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I can't wait to see what will happen in the next issue! |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 25, '09 10:22 | |
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Chaotic walks out into the crowd of spectators,he confronted B10. "Hello,the name's Chaotic. Nice story,owever...I DID find one big mistake...In the second part of your story...When Bryan first met Carl,Carl told Bryan that he was in prison for selling coke...However...In the most recent part of your story he tells you he wants to break out because he was in there for a murder he didn't commit..." Chaotic waits for his answer,lighting a cigarette. |
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Reply by: Chaotic at Dec 25, '09 10:36 | |
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Do not worry, that will be explained later in the story |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 25, '09 20:41 | |
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when will the next part be coming out |
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Reply by: sWaG at Dec 27, '09 02:13 | |
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I second that question! |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 27, '09 10:23 | |
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the next part will come out today or tomorrow |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 27, '09 10:43 | |
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wow! that's really good. |
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Reply by: lily at Dec 28, '09 16:38 | |
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Day 2 12:00 pm Bryan was walking outside with Carl, Tyrone, and Jason, getting some fresh that the inmates are allowed to have each day. It was mostly quiet. "I can't believe what happened" Jason said, "That Enzo guy..." "He wasn't always like that" Bryan told him. "So, back from whenever you knew him, he wasn't crazy? Seems hard to believe" Carl asked. "No, just partially" Bryan told him. As they continued to walk along, Carl asked, "So, have you seen a good way out yet?" "No, who ever made this, they made it impossible to break out of" Bryan told them. "So...like any other prison?" Tyrone said. "But, you said you and Enzo broke out of a prison once" Jason told Bryan. "Yeah, but this isn't the same prison" Bryan said. "So, if you can break out of one, you should be able to break out of another" Carl said. Bryan shook his head, signaling a no. "That's not true for everything" Bryan explained. Carl sighed, and the others were disappointed, but Bryan said, "But there is one possible way out" Carl and others stared at Bryan, waiting for him to talk. Bryan then said, "When we were going through the front building, the one where the warden's office was, I noticed it's architecture. There may be a way out that way" Carl then said, skeptical, "So, you're saying, we're going to walk out the front door?" "Dangerous, but possibly the only way out" Bryan said. The others looked at each other. Carl put his hand on Bryan's shoulder and turned him around. "You see that?" Carl said, pointing to one of the guard towers, "On there, there are guards with guns, you know, those things that can kill us?" "Yes I know" Bryan said, "I'll think of a way around that" Tyrone and Jason looked at each other, then Tyrone said, "You're one crazy son of a bitch, that's sounds like a crazy plan" Bryan smiled, "I'll think of everything, don't worry, I'll have plans for everything" Carl and the others walked away, and Bryan looked the the East side of the jail, where the psych ward was, for all the crazy people. It touched two of the four guard towers, and is reachable from the cells. Also, the asylum also touched the south part of the prison, where the 'front' door was. Bryan thought, Is there a way to get rid of the guards in those towers? Bryan had a call to make. He walked over to the phones and dialed a number, and listened to the annoying beeps, then a voice came on. "Hello?" Tony Castelli said, on the other end of the line. "Hey man, it's me, Bryan, I need to talk to you face to face in 4 hours" Bryan said. "Why?" he asked. "Just do it" Bryan said, before hanging up the phone. to be continued... |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 30, '09 16:05 | |
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If he needs a file i'll scream! Great story, though, Younever disappoint. :) |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 30, '09 16:13 | |
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Great story as always, Keep 'em coming b10. This series will always be one of the greatest out there. |
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Reply by: Tom_Hagen at Dec 30, '09 16:57 | |
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wow freaking exciting |
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Reply by: sWaG at Dec 30, '09 17:45 | |
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Keep it in your pants, swag |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 30, '09 19:38 | |
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Day 2 4:03pm Bryan waited Tony to come. He was impatient to talk to him. When Tony finally entered the room, Bryan said, "You're late, Tony" "By 3 minutes!" he exclaimed. He sat down in front of him. "So, what is it you need?" "Well...there is a possibility I might get out earlier than planned" Bryan told him. Tony was surprised, but he understood, "When do you think you will get out?" "The day before the trial" Bryan told him. "Why not wait?" Tony asked. "There are some... things bothering me, wanting for me to get out of here ASAP" Bryan told him. Tony sighed, realizing that Bryan was being threatened for his life to break out. "So, where do you want me to pick you up?" Tony asked, "On the day you are out of here?" "The East side, where the asylum is" Bryan told him. "Make sure to bring a van, I like vans" Tony understood. He was interested that he was going to be part of the breakout. "Anything else?" Tony asked. Bryan thought, and said, "No" Tony nodded and left. Then guards escorted me back to my cell. to be continued... |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 31, '09 11:42 | |
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b10, your uncle had some very strange situations, let me tell you, phew. |
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Reply by: mnirem at Dec 31, '09 13:02 | |
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I'll try to post another part later today |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Dec 31, '09 14:25 | |
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This story alone have me hooked |
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Reply by: sWaG at Dec 31, '09 17:21 | |
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MVP then arrives and catches on to what sWaG says...then he says"Im also hooked to." |
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