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21 and a half days (Sequel to 10 days) Started by: b7gangster on Oct 26, '09 16:44

new part will come out tomorrow

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Victory my name is mnirem! YEAH!

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Good story so far. I haven't read much but I can tell it's gonna be a wicked ending.

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Sorry, I'll try to get a new part out tomorrow

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This needs more, a.s.a.p!

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I'm so sorry, maybe soon if possible

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Day 2 7:00pm

The group got together in Bryan and Carl's cell to talk about what Bryan had in mind.

"The asylum there is connected to the main building, in the south, and it should have less guards then the other buildings. Also, there are two guard towers connected to the asylum. If we can get into the asylum, we can easily use makeshift weapons to take them out and get their guns. From there, we can easily walk out the front door"

"Problem with that" Enzo said, "I don't think that the door will be open, what if it's locked"

"Well, I'm going to figure out how long the warden stays for. He should be easy to get to once we are in. He should have keys to all the doors in the building, so that will solve that problem"

"then what about getting to the asylum?" The cellmate asked.

"That I'll have to work that out" Bryan told him.

"You have another, what, 19 days? You better figure that out" Enzo said.

"You sound just like Giovanni" Bryan told him.

Enzo was silent, remembering the guy.

"What you did with Carl's guy, and that laugh..." Bryan told him.

Enzo was completely silent, and had no expression and just looked onward, at me, but not to me.

"So after that..." the killer continued, "once we are out, then what?"

"My friend will take care of that, don't worry. The car will be on the West side of the building. He will leave it with the keys inside it"

He nodded his head in approval.

"Wait, then what about those guard towers on the West side?" the cellmate asked.

"Don't worry, I'll take care of that too. I'll think of something" Bryan told them with a smile.

to be continued...

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Dino Moretti  hears b7gangster's tale.and claps loudly.very nice b7gagster. i very much would like to hear more from you young man.

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Haha. I love it. More baby more.

This really is great stuff.

Rorschach steps back and makes his way down the street.

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new part coming out tomorrow

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FANTASTIC !

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Just keep em coming you tales are always entertaining

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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ......

I can not wait for next part to come

Jewish_Vidi  sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting

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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ......

I can not wait for next part to come

Jewish_Vidi  sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting

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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ......

I can not wait for next part to come

Jewish_Vidi  sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting

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You must be eager JV you told him three times :)

But indeed I share his sentiment you are a great author and should be writting some novels for us all to read

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Interesting that no one pointed out that Bryan told Tony to have the van on the East side, and yet Bryan tells his inmates it will be on the West

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new part Thursday or Friday if possible

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Something is afoot. West is not East and East is no doubt not West.

Indeed.

<em>begins to throw red roses all over the place</em>

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Tony"Fighter" Joel walks up to Bryan,shakes his hand and tell him,

"That is a very good story you have there man. If you have anything else as good as this-make a movie with it or get yourself published"

He then turns on his heel and walks out

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