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21 and a half days (Sequel to 10 days) | Started by: b7gangster on Oct 26, '09 16:44 |
new part will come out tomorrow |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 09, '10 20:07 | |
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Victory my name is mnirem! YEAH! |
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Reply by: mnirem at Jan 10, '10 08:35 | |
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Good story so far. I haven't read much but I can tell it's gonna be a wicked ending. |
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Reply by: Mejar-Suchowlinski at Jan 11, '10 00:00 | |
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Sorry, I'll try to get a new part out tomorrow |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 12, '10 16:03 | |
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This needs more, a.s.a.p! |
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Reply by: Nikolas at Jan 15, '10 23:27 | |
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I'm so sorry, maybe soon if possible |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 17, '10 11:39 | |
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Day 2 7:00pm The group got together in Bryan and Carl's cell to talk about what Bryan had in mind. "The asylum there is connected to the main building, in the south, and it should have less guards then the other buildings. Also, there are two guard towers connected to the asylum. If we can get into the asylum, we can easily use makeshift weapons to take them out and get their guns. From there, we can easily walk out the front door" "Problem with that" Enzo said, "I don't think that the door will be open, what if it's locked" "Well, I'm going to figure out how long the warden stays for. He should be easy to get to once we are in. He should have keys to all the doors in the building, so that will solve that problem" "then what about getting to the asylum?" The cellmate asked. "That I'll have to work that out" Bryan told him. "You have another, what, 19 days? You better figure that out" Enzo said. "You sound just like Giovanni" Bryan told him. Enzo was silent, remembering the guy. "What you did with Carl's guy, and that laugh..." Bryan told him. Enzo was completely silent, and had no expression and just looked onward, at me, but not to me. "So after that..." the killer continued, "once we are out, then what?" "My friend will take care of that, don't worry. The car will be on the West side of the building. He will leave it with the keys inside it" He nodded his head in approval. "Wait, then what about those guard towers on the West side?" the cellmate asked. "Don't worry, I'll take care of that too. I'll think of something" Bryan told them with a smile. to be continued... |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 17, '10 12:52 | |
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Dino Moretti hears b7gangster's tale.and claps loudly.very nice b7gagster. i very much would like to hear more from you young man. |
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Reply by: DinoMoretti at Jan 18, '10 03:50 | |
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Haha. I love it. More baby more. This really is great stuff. Rorschach steps back and makes his way down the street. |
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Reply by: Rorschach at Jan 18, '10 07:22 | |
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new part coming out tomorrow |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 18, '10 20:52 | |
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FANTASTIC ! |
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Reply by: The_JesTer at Jan 19, '10 09:06 | |
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Just keep em coming you tales are always entertaining |
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Reply by: BombaySapphire at Jan 19, '10 17:50 | |
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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ...... I can not wait for next part to come Jewish_Vidi sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting |
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Reply by: Jewish_Vidi at Jan 20, '10 16:47 | |
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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ...... I can not wait for next part to come Jewish_Vidi sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting |
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Reply by: Jewish_Vidi at Jan 20, '10 16:47 | |
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I have been reading your story's and they are very interesting ...... I can not wait for next part to come Jewish_Vidi sits on edge of chair eagerly waiting |
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Reply by: Jewish_Vidi at Jan 20, '10 16:47 | |
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You must be eager JV you told him three times :) But indeed I share his sentiment you are a great author and should be writting some novels for us all to read |
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Reply by: BombaySapphire at Jan 20, '10 21:46 | |
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Interesting that no one pointed out that Bryan told Tony to have the van on the East side, and yet Bryan tells his inmates it will be on the West |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 20, '10 22:24 | |
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new part Thursday or Friday if possible |
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Reply by: b10gangster at Jan 20, '10 22:25 | |
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Something is afoot. West is not East and East is no doubt not West. Indeed. <em>begins to throw red roses all over the place</em> |
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Reply by: Jello at Jan 21, '10 09:36 | |
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Tony"Fighter" Joel walks up to Bryan,shakes his hand and tell him, "That is a very good story you have there man. If you have anything else as good as this-make a movie with it or get yourself published" He then turns on his heel and walks out |
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Reply by: Fighter at Jan 21, '10 14:48 | |
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