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| 10 days | Started by: b7gangster on Oct 03, '09 13:05 |
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Fayth reads on in horror Oh my god! I cant wait for the next part. That was sooo good |
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| Reply by: Fayth at Oct 12, '09 17:38 | |
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thank you |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 18:07 | |
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Day 4 7:10 pm I heard the shot, and then another shot, but it took me a while to realize the shooter wasn't the assassin, it was a cop in the distance. "Everyone freeze and stay where you are" the cop yelled. I looked around to see Giovanni, on the ground in pain, and Enzo, shot in the knee. "That hurts like hell!" Giovanni yelled. And Enzo yelled, "You bastard, you shot me in my knee!" Giovanni yelled, "I was shot! I didn't mean to you asshole!" Then I realized I was being dragged by the killer as shots were flying in the air. "We need to get out of here, we have to leave them behind!" he yelled. I was reluctant, because he was leaving behind Enzo, but I didn't fight back. He pulled me to the car and got in the drivers seat and I got in shotgun. The cop fired at the car, but missed us. I looked back to see Giovanni and Enzo arrested. I had now betrayed Enzo, the only person who might have helped me. We drove away and went to some apartment. It was most likely the killers. He got me a beer and a beer for himself, "Damn, they got arrested, oh well, I'll have to get Giovanni out later" He pointed the gun at me. "What the hell are you doing!?" i yelled. "The deal is still the same, just get our guy out tomorrow, since we don't have anyone of your family to kill, i guess at the day of the execution, I'll just kill you if he's not safe" Then I asked, "What about Giovanni and Enzo?" He sighed, "Screw Enzo, I'll have to see what I can do about Giovanni though" I was disappointed. I could try to get Enzo out, after this is over. "I'll drive you to your place, and you better get him out tomorrow" he said. Day 4 11:00 pm I was getting ready for bed, I had a big day tomorrow. Then I received a call. When I answered, I was shocked at the words I heard. "The trial has been canceled on a count of your criminal activities regarding the murder of two men near a warehouse, Do not try to run, cops are coming to your place, they will shoot if needed to stop you" to be continued |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 19:09 | |
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b7 gangster you got talent brother try writing a book or go make a screenplay seriously! |
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| Reply by: gionni at Oct 12, '09 19:44 | |
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thank you |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 20:10 | |
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Nice, real nice. winks |
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| Reply by: MayorWillie_Herenton at Oct 12, '09 20:19 | |
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you can fly back to St. Louis now, there will be no more today |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 20:20 | |
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Twistes at every turn I love this story! |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 12, '09 21:16 | |
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thank you |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 21:17 | |
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No, Thank You :) |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 12, '09 21:25 | |
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lol |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 12, '09 21:27 | |
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I will be telling the rest soon soon, as soon as I come back , I have to go somewhere and when i come back, I'll tell you people another part |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 13, '09 17:01 | |
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oooooh you know i love this story!! |
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| Reply by: Fayth at Oct 13, '09 17:36 | |
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Day 4 11:05pm I had always wanted to be a good citizen of America. Never wanted to even misbehave. And now look at the irony. This was becoming my past now. I wasn't going to be that good citizen, i needed to run! So that's what I did, I ran to my car, got in, turned it on, and started driving. Pretty soon, I heard the sirens waling loudly behind me. The cops were on to me, gaining up to me with every passing second. I was finally driving in the city, I was hoping that if I got to the killer's safe house, I might be safe. But i needed to get rid of the cops first. One cop car started driving up near me and began to ram into me. Looking around, I saw the other lane, and I rammed back. I pushed their car into the other lane were it was struck by an incoming car. There was no escape from the cops however. As I continued to drive, I knew I couldn't continue. I had to stop. I got out of the car and put my hands behind my back. The cops started pulling up and they cuffed me. It felt horrible to know what had happened now. Day 5 12:30am I had arrived at prison lateat night. I was going to be tried later todayit, It felt ironic to know that I was supposed to get someone out of jail through legal systems, and now I was going to jail through legal systems. My wife and son are dead, I don't know where my other son is. He might be on the streets cold and miserable. Nothing I could do. I had arrived at my cell and the guard said, "Never used to being here, aye lawyer? Pitiful" He closed the cell door. I then noticed that someone was already in here. They were sitting on one of the beds. "Hello?" I said. "Hello, Bryan" the person said. They walked from the shadows, and I found out my cellmate was Giovanni. "Nice to see you again" he said without any happiness this time. He grabbed me and held me against the wall. "You're a son of a birch, you know that?" he said, "Leaving me and Enzo behind to be caught by the cops, and now you're in here" he looked at me with great anger, "And you're unable to get my little friend out of here" "Hey, look Giovanni, I..." I tried to say. "Don't try any excuses here Bryan, you screwed up everything by working with Enzo, you should of trusted me" he said. He threw me to the ground. "Unless you can pull a miracle out your ass, I'll kill you when my boss is dead" Day 5 9:00am "Wake up, you filth, time for breakfast!" I heard a guard say. As I woke up, I saw Giovanni already awake. "Awake you bastard" he said as he walked out. I got up from bed. I was reluctant to go anywhere. Then some person entered the cell. As I looked up, I saw it was Enzo. "Enzo..." I said. "Look man, I understand, you did what you had to do, and I'm okay with that" he said, "We're still on the same team man, Giovanni will have us killed, so we need to stick together if we want to survive" I looked at him, and then said, "Yeah, sure..." I was stilled depressed about everything. "Come one, let's get some food, it might be crap but I'm hungry" he said, walking out the cell. I followed, but I was unsure of what the day would be bring. to be continued |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 13, '09 18:24 | |
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oh I can hardly wait for the next part!!! |
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| Reply by: Fayth at Oct 13, '09 18:31 | |
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i see that you are excited, i might not get to tell anything else of my story until tomorrow or Friday, it's my cousins birthday on Thursday, It be bad if I didn't go |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 13, '09 18:36 | |
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I can't wait to see what happens! |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 13, '09 18:36 | |
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this story rules!! |
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| Reply by: Fabrizio_Senzafine at Oct 13, '09 18:39 | |
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thank you |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 13, '09 18:40 | |
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I know I've said this over and over but again Great Story man!!!! |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 13, '09 20:15 | |
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