I don't want it to end just yet. Makes me sad.

Mnirem sulks and walks away.

It's a nice story, maybe the fact that it's true makes it that much more realistic. Stories that are easy to believe tend to be far better than stories that are a tad far-fetched.

thank you everyone for your comments

i will tell the next part by 7pm if possible

Day 10 8:30pm

As we heard the sirens roar, we looked for a way to escape.

Then I saw a car that we could hijack. "Come on, take the car!"I yelled. They all proceeded to the car, but I stopped and stopped the cellmate.

"What are you doing?" he yelled.

"We don't need you" I said. I grabbed him by the shirt and threw it backwards into the manhole. He fell and his screams were short lived. We didn't need him anymore, I didn't need him anymore. Only the four of us, Giovanni, Paul, Enzo, and me, needed to continue. We had no need for him and he was a waste of our efforts.

I broke the glass on the window to the driver's seat, opened the door, and got in. I quickly hot-wired the car and started driving.

Giovanni was next me, with Paul behind him. Enzo was sitting behind me.

"Did you take care of him?" Giovanni asked.

"Yes" I answered. 

"Good, we had no use for people like him" he said. "We were just dragging his weight with us"

He laughed, then he cried in pain.

"What the?!" Enzo yelled. I looked in the mirror to see Enzo holding a gun to the criminal's head.

I heard sirens as police cars continue to chase us.

I looked beside me. Giovanni's blood was pouring out of his chest, he was dead. However, Enzo did not kill him, the criminal was holding his gun and had fired it through the seat.

"Why the hell did you do that!?" Enzo yelled, still holding a gun to him. Enzo took away his gun for safety.

"He ruined everything, my life, your life, Enzo's life" he said, "Enzo always had to kill someone, ruin someone's life, hurt people, he couldn't control it"

"At had enough, when he had you kill the cellmate for your own safety..." he said.

"How did you know?" I asked. The cops continued to chase us.

"He tells me everything, to be honest, I never wanted to join the life I had" he said. "I told you to not win that case because I knew Giovanni would do anything to get me out, I wasn't warning you out of selfishness, I was trying to help you"

Everything was silent.

"I'm tired of life, I'm tired of being a criminal and ruining so many lives, I'm done with it" he said. He pulled out a gun.

"Where did that come from?" I asked. The cops continued to catch up to us.

"Picked it up from a fallen guard" he said. "I'm tired, Bryan, I'm tired" He put the gun to his forehead, and Enzo tried to take it away from him, but he pulled the trigger.

He was dead instantly, it was too late now.

We were silent, all we heard was the police sirens.

For almost an hour we drove through the city, avoiding the cops and finally getting out of their sights. We were free men.

We stopped the car near an alley and ran through the alleys, we ran all the way to an apartment Enzo used as a safe-house, a place the cops didn't know he had.

We were inside, we were safe.

"I can't believe all this has happened" Enzo said. "I'm gonna have a beer, want one?"

"No thanks" I said. He walked to the fridge, but I decided to follow him. As he got a beer from the fridge and turned around, I had a gun pointed in his direction.

"What are you doing?!" he yelled.

"This..." I said. Then I fired two shots into his chest. He fell to the floor in pain.

"Why...why...why the hell did you do that!?" he yelled.

I bent down and looked him in the eye and said, "You betrayed me"

"How!?" he questioned "I never did!"

"Then how come every time I was in danger, you weren't there to help me?"

"I just wasn't!" he yelled.

"Just tell the truth" I asked.

He was in pain, but he was able to say, "Giovanni...promised me that...he would...allow me back into their gang...if...I..."

"betrayed me?" I asked.

"I made sure I wasn't around...to stop them..." he said. "And when you made that prison break proposal...they said...when we were all free...I had to kill you...instead"

"You even betrayed Vincent" I said, "You would have known were he was, he would have been with you, but then it seemed you didn't know about what was going to happen to him"

"He was going to tell you about everything and ruin it all, he had to die, I had told him that you were meeting someone in the cell he died in, but he met the killer there instead"

"Also Enzo..." I said, "If it wasn't for you, I could have gotten the criminal out legally, if you never persuaded for me to betray Giovanni, none of this murder would have happened and many people would still be alive!" I yelled.

"I'm...sorry" he said in agony.

I pulled out my gun and said to him, "Understand consequences of everything you do, Enzo"

I fired another shot into his heart. He cried in pain as I said, "I'm going to leave you here to bleed to death, Enzo" I looked at him in the eye and said, "Goodbye Enzo"

I walked out of there and a few minutes later cops arrived. I was safe, I was the only one to live and escape. I survived this nightmare, but I was still in it. My life was ruined, my family was dead, my job is gone, I had no choice but to join this thing of ours. I had no where else to go.

That's why I'm a mafioso.

You should make a sequal about his life after this. Great story!

Legendary..Thanks a lot mate, this story was the best one i ever read on the streets

thank you

i might tell a part two with some big surprises

YES!!!

Whaaapaa!

WOW!!!

It's over.  The most epic story ever in these streets is over. 

<em> Holding back tears</em>

At least there's a part 2 to look forward to.

Great story buddy, all the way to the end!!

Thanks alot!!

thank you

I will think of ideas and try to tell the beginning of part 2 by next Monday

I'm not usually a drama queen, but...that was amazing

thank you

Wow thats a great Story. I'm dieing to hear about Part Two

It already cam out.