This is very good writing. Keep it up.

Excellent!!!! Now they all have to work together for the greater good. This should get intersting.   Although now that I think about it it already has been interesting the whole time...

Pardo, say you'rer sorry! You maded a mistake. Wether you corrected it or not, you have to say it!

Mnirem with all due respect, b7 knows how I feel about his story!  If he askes for an apology then he'll get one!

No need for an apology, i understand what DonPardo meant.

I was joking lol!

Day 6 1:00pm

I couldn't believe he was here in prison, the killer.I didn't know why he was in here, but he was here, and he probably wants me dead. Giovanni will probably want him in on the prison break, just in case.

As I lay on my bed thinking about this, Enzo walked in and said, "Man, I can't believe he's in here, it's unbelieveable"

"Yeah, well..." I said.

He looked at me and said, "How are you not worried, he might have me killed, or you or my guys" he was frightened.

I was silent. He just stood there and shrugged. He said, "I guess you're not in the mood right now to talk" he walked out of the room, and I just stayed where I was. Then, all of a sudden, I was grabbed and pulled out of my bed. I saw it was Giovanni.

"What are you doing just laying around, you got to think of a way out of here for us" he said.

"I was, you asshole!" I yelled. He picked me up and made me stand, but he didn't hurt me.

He asked, "seven people is enough to get out of here, right?" I started thinking. Was he going to leave the killer behind.

"Yes" I said. He smiled.

He looked behind him and said, "Go ahead"

I looked over his shoulder and there was the killer. He smiled and left. I grabbed Giovanni and asked, "What is he going to do!?"

Giovanni laughed. "Make sure Enzo doesn't think about betraying us!" he said. I started running after the killer, but he was gone. I started running to Enzo's cell. I looked in the cell and he was there with Peter, smoking cigarettes.

"Are you guys okay?" I asked.

"Yeah, want some cigarettes? We got them from a buddy" Peter said.

I looked around and asked, "Where's Vincent?"

They shrugged and Enzo said, "Don't know"

"Heard he went to get more cigarettes from our buddy" Peter said. :Why do you need him?"

"He might be in danger!" I said to them.

They were surprised, they sprang up and we were all going to the buddy's cell. When we got there, all we found was Vincent's dead body. He was strangled to death, and I also saw the killer nearby smiling at me with satisfaction.

to be continued

Damn good story..

OMG!!!

I don't even know what to say.   You are such a good writter and you keep making this story the most epic in the streets with every passing entry!

Keep up the good work buddy

Hey B7gangster go make a movie man!!! i feel like i should be paying to read this!

thanks

This story gets better and better!!

thank you

I might tell another part later today, but i am unsure if i will

Yay-ish!

Day 6 2:00pm

I saw Giovanni back at the cell with the criminal, just talking. As I entered, they saw me and Giovanni said, "So, did my guy kill him?" he said it mockingly and with satisfaction, with no regret.

"Can you just go one day without killing someone!?" I asked.

"Well then that's a waste of a day for me" he said laughing. Paul, the criminal, laughed too.

"You son of a bitch" I said, "Why did you kill him anyway!?"

"To make sure Enzo understands what this...what do you call it...agreement to work together, means" he said. "I needed Enzo to understand what will happen if any of you betray us" They walked out the cell and back into the main crowd.

I sat down on my bed and thought about everything. Then a guard came by and said, "We found your son"

I looked up and stood. I asked, "Really! Is he okay?!"

"He's fine, he was scared like shit! You are one horrible parent, abandoning your child like that!" he said.

"You don't understand!" I yelled.

"And I don't give a damn! He's being taken care of and will be going to child services, so that he will be as far away from you as possible!" the guard said while leaving the cell.

I sat back down on the bed, thinking of everything again. I couldn't believe all of the things that have happened.

Day 6 3:00pm

As I looked around the cafeteria, Enzo and Peter sat in front of me.

"Are you sure we can trust Giovanni?" Enzo questioned. "He has already killed one of our guys, for nothing!"

"I'm not sure" I said.

"Well I need to be sure that I'm safe, man!" he said. "We're in danger, and him jeopardizing everything like this is not helping!"

"Well what do you want me to do about this!?" I asked.

"Get us out of here, and quickly too!" Peter said.

"I'm trying okay!" I said.

"Well trying isn't enough!" Enzo said. There was silence between the three of us.

"Have you even started on a plan yet?" Enzo asked.

"Partially, but I still got to think things through" I said.

"Okay then" Enzo said.

Then I saw them approached, Giovanni's gang. They sat down around us. 

"Hello, partners" Giovanni said.

"We're only working with you for this one time" Peter said. The killer reached across the table and started choking the man with one hand.

"Watch what you say" Giovanni said. The killer released him.

"Giovanni, you can't keep killing people, we need to keep everything low profile!" I said.

They looked to each other. "We'll see what we can do, as for now" the criminal said.

"We do have a time limit though" Giovanni said.

"What do you mean?" I asked.

"You asshole! We have only five days to get out of here or my boss is dead! If we aren't out of here by then, you're dead, and I'll make sure you wished you never tried to help Enzo!"

to be continued

I will tell another part tomorrow

Nice!!!

No one trust anyone but they all are going to have to work together to get out.  This should be a very interesting jail break!

Nice!!!

No one trust anyone but they all are going to have to work together to get out.  This should be a very interesting jail break!