ofcourse i liked it :s story is goin great please post the next episode asap mate :)

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Epic!

Very nice!

Day 5 8:00 PM

I was sitting on my bed, just thinking of everything that has happened today. Then Giovanni comes into the room and says, "My, my, my. My friend is dead, you wouldn't know anything about that, would you, cellmate?"

He grabbed me by the throat and squeezed but didn't choke.

"You had him to try to kill me!" I said with difficulty. "You son of a bitch!"

"He punched me in the face. Hard. I rolled over and fell to the floor. My nose was gushing blood and my entire face was in pain. Giovanni looked over me, and kicked me in my side. I rolled over in pain after yelling in agony. He then picked up by my shirt and put me against the wall.

"You better have a good reason why I should not snap your neck your neck right now!" He yelled. Other prisoners were watching what was happening.

"I...do...have a...good reason...Giovanni" I said as he was slowly beginning to choke me.

He let go and began to laugh, but he continued to hold me against the wall. "What is this little reason you have, I haven't heard a good joke in a while" he said mockingly. He turned around and yelled to the other inmates, "Get the hell away! You have no business here!" The inmates left slowly. He turned and faced me.

"There might be a way to break out of here" I said.

He looked intrigued, but then became uninterested. He said, "Many people have tried that, lost there lives trying, what makes you think you can break me and my friend out of here?"

I said, "When I was still a lawyer, one thing I saw was a lay out of prisons, this one was one I saw. I remember it partially, but I might be able to think of a way out" I looked at him for his judgement.

He looked at me with suspicion but some interest. "You better be telling the truth, Bryan, and if you can get us out of here like that, I'll let you live" he said. He walked away from me and back out the cell, but he turned around and said, "If you are lying to me, you'll be dead in a heartbeat"

to be continued

wow.

thank you

im waitin for bryan's revenge..he must be still in pain cuz of his wife and kids loss :-/  storys gettin interestin each passin episode

thanks

If someone can think of a very good reason for me to tell another part, I will.

If no one can give me a good reason, or gives negative comments, I'm going to go.

Good reason? Giovanni must die.. this is enough reason lol .. plus , i suggest you to tell another story on Giovanni..his past , how did he become a mobster etc ..

I'm not telling what happens to Giovanni yet. He may or may not die.

If I tell a part 2, he might be in it.

in 13 minutes, if no one has a really good reason for me to tell another part, I'm going to leave

Watch, I got him to post the next part. Wait for it...

Awwww, i just lost 30k for jack!

Day 6 10:00AM

I was sitting alone in the cafeteria. I was eating a meal of oatmeal. It tasted disgusting. I was more adjusted to eating pancakes, bacon, eggs, and other stuff that...that my wife ...my wife made for me and my...kids.

I looked across the room and see three people coming to my table. Giovanni, the criminal, and his cellmate. They sat down around me and Giovanni says, "I told these two the idea, so, what's the plan on how to escape, we only got 5 days"

They looked at me. I said, "There is no plan yet" They frowned at this.

"Excuse me?" the criminal said.

"No plan ye..." That's all I could say before Giovanni pulled my food away and the criminal hit my head against the table. I flipped off and said, "assholes"

I looked at them. "Is this all of you?" I asked.

He nodded, and I said, "This isn't enough people"

"Well what do you suppose?" the cellmate said. They looked at me and he said, "Should we find some people who will agree to this?"

"Well, we may already have three people who can help us" I said. Giovanni looked pissed.

"I won't work with that piece of shit!" he growled.

"Enzo might be the perfect person to help us!" I reasoned.

"He betrayed me, why wouldn't he do it again?" the criminal asked.

"Cause he would be betraying me" I said. "He also must want his freedom too"

They looked at each other. Then Giovanni said, "Fine! Ask him if him and his crappy friends want to be in this"

"I will" I said.

As I got up, Giovanni said, "If he tries anything during the breakout, he's a dead man, and you too"

Day 6 Noon

Enzo was leaning against a wall. I approached him and he said, "Hey Bryan, what do you need?" 

"I think I know a way out of here" I said.

His eyes lit up and he spoke softly, "A breakout!"

"Yeah, but we'll need Giovanni's help, your friends' too"

He looked disgusted. "Giovanni! Let me guess, his boss too?!"

I nodded and he spit in disapproval.

"Yeah, well none of us will get out if we don't have them or you" I said.

He looked at me, "I'll think about it, it might be my only way out of here for a while"

"Good, thanks man" I said. I walked away from him, but as I turned around, I saw at the end of the room, a man entering into the room through a double door. I thought my eyes were playing me. It was him. Giovanni's killer. He was here now. He was here now in prison!

to be continued

One of the best parts. They all are!

thanks

i might not be able to tell anything tomorrow, but i will tell something on sunday

yay!