Day 1

My life was ruined, yes, ruined. My two children and my wife have been kidnapped and were held hostage. In order to save them, i had to break a man out of prison or they would die. i couldn't handle the agony, the stress, the horror, and the disbelief. I couldn't sleep the first night. I just laid silently, looking at a ceiling. I didn't know what to do...or what to believe...

During the morning, i had started contacting people. I needed to get the guy out, and if possible, legally. I didn't want to be part of this thing of ours, i thought this world was loathsome, horrifying , and unbearable. I didn't want my reputation to be destroyed, but I didn't want my family gone forever.

Even though I was a lawyer, there was hardly anything I could do. There isn't much I could do in just one day. I made calls and calls and calls. I asked for some favors and for some people to return some favors. I needed to do everything I could to save my family.

Finally, I was able to talk to the right people. I was able to talk to someone who could have a appeals court arranged so that the man might live, heck, maybe just stay in jail for the rest of his life. Maybe then, the gang he was in will let my family go.

I had to meet with him today at 7 pm. I had gotten dressed in my best suit, tailored just for me, and I was off.

The building was a simple law building. But for me, it was where i would start saving my family's lives.

I walked into a room, a big, nice fancy office. A man was siting at the desk. He seemed serious, unmoving, and he looked at me, but with not the mood i had hoped for.

"Bryan? Is that your name...Bryan?" he asked

"Yes sir, that's my...name" I said.

He looked at me, no change in mood. He sighed, "Have a seat" he said.

I slowly walked to the seat in front of his desk. He then said to me, "You know, i have gotten appeals for people who murdered people because they asked them to, or that their lawyer hated them, or for a lawyer wanting THEIR client to have an appeal...but never a lawyer who wanted the appeal of the person they put in jail"

"Can we get to the matter at hand please!" I said rudely, "Oh, sorry..."

He looked at me strangely. "You're not off to a good start you know..."

"Yes I know..." I said.

"Listen, just tell me what the hell you want" he said, "I have a wife and kid at home and i would like to see them soon"

I remembered my kids and wife, and knew  i might never...see them again...

"I may have accidentally confused some of my evidence" I lied, "We may be sending a innocent man to death, or at least a man who should only get a life time in jail..."

For around an hour, I had argued with the man. Showing evidence, facts, and asking for another trial.

"Well..." I asked.

He looked at me, thinking about it. He made a call, but i couldn't hear what he said. When he put the phone down he said to me, "3pm, tomorrow, same court, you will be representing the scumbag, now get out of here!" 

I was so relieved. "Thank you sir, thank you so much!" i shook his hand and left.

I was walking to my car, and before i could get in, someone grabbed me and held me at gun point. The man looked pissed.

"You don't want to win this case, not this time, or I'll have a bullet in your brain by tomorrow!"

"W-Who are...a-are you?!" I stammered.

"Someone who never wants to see that man in the streets again!"

to be continued, later in this forum

Day 1 8pm

I was still held at gun point as the guy stuffed me in a car. Two other men were in the car. As I sat down between them, they looked with angry glares at me.

"You probably shouldn't have done that, Bryan" The man said.

"You don't understand, please, hear me out..." i said in panic. He still had me at gun point.

"That person had ruined the lives of everyone in this car, and other peoples lives, so stop talking and listen" he said

"We don't care about anything you say, so understand this, we have your sister, you know, the one with three kids whose husband had died in a car accident. You don't want anything to happen to her, do you?" he said

"Please, stop this! You don't understand!"  I yelled. He then shot me in the shoulder. The pain, I had never felt such greater pain. It was horrible. It was almost unbearable.

"I don't care, if you continue on with this case, we will kill her, no matter what" he said

i was unable to speak from the pain. then we had stopped and i was pushed out of the car. they drove away and left me on the ground.

Day 2 10:30 AM

I woke up in the hospital. The pain in my shoulder was gone, but i could see two people hanging over me. It was the man who held a gun to my son's head, and some other guy who i had not met yet.

"Good, you finally woke up" he said to me. He then motioned his other guy to leave the room. "First time being shot, painful, isn't it?"

"I got an appeals court, your man might not die after all, maybe just life in prison" I said.

He looked at me, "That will...work, we can break him out. If you can get him out of the death sentence, then everything's okay, we'll release everyone"

"I need to add one more thing to the deal though..." I said

"Wait, what...?" he said, "What else could you want?" he said.

I said, "My sister is in danger, if i go to court, some people will have her killed, I just want her safe...please" I looked at him. He sighed.

"I'll see what I can do, I'll go to the court too, and see if this guy comes and make sure he releases your dumb sister,someone has to come to make sure you don't, is that what you want?" He said.

"Yes..." I said.

"Man, you lawyers want everything" he said.

I had to return home to get my suit. When I had arrived home, I only had an hour to get everything prepared. I got my briefcase, my suit on, and i fixed my hair and washed my face. Just to be safe, i put a gun in my pocket.

Just as i walked out the door, something grabbed me from behind. I could fell a garrote on my neck. i began to choke, unable to see my choker. I felt the pain of losing my breath, all oxygen. I got to my knees and trued to squirm out of his grip. Then i pulled out my gun and aimed behind me. i fired three shots.

The grip on the garrote ended and I could breath again. I looked back to see a guy. But not any guy, one of the guys from when I was kidnapped last night and shot. I now, had truly realized what danger i was in.

to be continued, later in this forum

Mind-blowing!

you really like my stories, don't ya?

I'm actually working on a story myself. I love to read.

Great read friend, I look forward to the second part.

Still got my attention. Unbelievable, great story.

thank you

second part? I just got done with the third!

Can't wait for the fourth!

Can't wait for the fourth!

lol

I'll try to do it tomorrow

Great Story. Cant wait for the next one to come out.

Sorry, didn't mean to do it twice

Can't wait for the fourth!

Day 2 2:30pm

Have you ever known what it was like to be nearly killed?! I wasn't in this thing of ours and I was nearly wacked! I was now trapped in this, for the entire trip.

I had arrived at the court to see the heartless man. He walked to me and said, "We'll keep an eye out for anyone who might be in the gang that has your sister" He looked at me and sat down at a chair and waited for the trial to begin. I went to the front and awaited for my client to appear.

Then, when i looked back, i saw one pissed off guy near the door, and he looked at me with anger, I knew he was the guy who was waiting for me.

I looked at the guy who had my family and pointed to the other man, he looked and nodded. As the person left, my guy and I got up and followed the man. We followed him to a telephone booth. 

We walked up to him and said, "Mind with we have a little chat?"

He looked at me and the other guy, "You shouldn't of come, you shouldn't have!" 

"We don't care" my guy said, revealing a gun. Then a car started to pull up and some people came out and surrounded the guy.

"You scumbag" he said to me.

"Yeah, that's nice. Call your guys and tell them to release my sister!" I yelled at him. he looked at me and nodded. he picked up the phone, put in some money, punched in the numbers, and started talking.

I listened as he said, "Hey it's me, you know, the guy waiting to see if the lawyer came?"

I listened in horror as he said, "He showed up! Kill the woman!"

"NO!" I yelled as I heard a gun shot from the phone. "You son of a ..." I punched him in the face. He fell back a little. He was grabbed and the men tried to put him in the car. But he freed his arm, pulled out a gun, and tried to shoot at me, I dodged and started running. I saw them take the gun and shot him in the head. They took his body and put it in the car.

People were panicking. I went to my car and drove home. All I could do was wait.

I had a call an hour of returning home. When I picked up the phone, I heard my guy say, "We found her body, I'm sorry, we did what we could..."

I put the phone down, sat in a chair, and felt miserable. My life was ruined...for good.

to be continued

wow! You ever thought of publishing a book?

actually, i have considered becoming an author

Keep it coming buddy. Excellent

Nice work

The force is strong in you i can feel that it is so.

When will you publish your work so that everyone could enjoy it. :D