great story bro keep em coming ur a  great stoy teller.

Great story,very anxious for part two:)

 thank you

Nice piece of work here, keep it up

i might not be able to post anything till Friday, still working on the ideas for the story

Part 2 is great. after the first one wasn't too sure how good the next one might be. UNTIL i listened to it. 

Thanks for passing some time before i had to go meet a friend

Looks at his watch then walks off.

Day 3 10:30 AM

It hit the papers about what happened. The shooting. It said in the papers that a gun was fired and no one knows who shot the gun and why. Luckily, no one knew that this had anything to do with me.

I heard from the guy I met to ask for the trial and he said because of the shooting, the trial had to be moved to 2 days from now. When I heard this, I was devastated. My kid was going to die today if I didn't get the guy out of jail.

What could I do?

I called my guy and when he picked up I said "Hey man, I have some news"

"Just letting you know, my name is Giovanni, it's annoying for you to call me man" he said.

"Whatever, Giovanni, the court has been moved to 2 days from now, I can still get your guy out, just don't kill my son!"

There was a long silence on the phone, I heard some conversation going on, but not loud enough to hear it. Then Giovanni said, "I'm sorry, I'm not sure if that can be done"

"W-W-What do...what do you mean c-can't be done!?" I stammered.

"We had a deal Bryan, and you didn't get our guy out yet" he said.

"But...!" i tried to say.

"Don't but me, I'm sorry Brian, but we had a deal, and you didn't fulfill your part of it, so why should I do my part?" he said.

"This isn't fair!" I yelled.

"Life's not fair, he will die at midnight, you can see him before then, Be at a warehouse, my guy will bring the address to you by 7pm. If you bring cops, I'll never be able to call my guys before midnight to let your wife and other child live" he said, "Be at the warehouse by 8 pm to 11:30 pm if you want to see your kid for the last time. Have a nice day, Brian"

Then there was silence on the phone.

to be continued

I already want and need more!

this is possibly the best story going on the streets

If you want a story for yourself, come to my LA bookstore

I'll sell you a story for a price

for the story or for my bookstore?

Story, but the bookstore thing is cool, too.

oh, okay

thanks

Very Good!

Great story. I love stories like this. It's what I enjoy most about the game.

thank you

OMG, You are a sick storyteller, got me needing more like a drug feen.  Keep up the good work can't wait for the next installment.

wow, I'm getting a lot of fans

LOL....You're earning everyone too : )

wow, that's an amazing story.

Please, hurry up with the next part! :D

Keep up the good work mate :)

//W