i will try to post tomorrow

Tomorrow? too long. i NEED IT!. asap

sorry, but you got to wait

lol

Letting you now, tomorrow, I will write one of the saddest parts ever of this story

this story is the CHRONIC

seems like you got a lot of people into this.

Good story btw

"-Deathstalker- applauded b7gangster and said"

It's amazing, I'm looking forward for the next scene.

I never used to read some stories and finished, but you, you got my taste, well done, continue this great work of yours :D. 

Shaking Deathstalker's hand

Thank you so much. I am glad that you like my story

Day 3 8:00pm

Have you ever been told you can have a few minutes with a family member before they die. This is different. My son was to be intentional killed, just because I couldn't get the criminal out of jail. I was devastated, miserable, and filled with guilt.

I had gotten the address for the place at 7 like Giovanni said. It was to a warehouse in the city. I had started driving there, and I was remembering this last few days. It was misery.

I had arrived at the warehouse to see two men. They escorted me inside, where I saw my son, tied up to a chair, and Giovanni.

"Giovanni, please, don't do this" I asked.

He nodded a no and said "We had a deal, I'm sure a lawyer like you can understand what that means"

The two men forced me into a chair, and tied me up as well, I asked "W-Why are they tying me up? Can't I-I just talk to my son?"

He got close to me and looked me in the eye, and smiled, before saying "We didn't want you to come to just talk to your son and say goodbye"

"Daddy? What are they going to do to me?" My kid cried. I could see the fear in his eyes.

Giovanni got up and walked behind my kid. "We wanted your father to understand our entire deal"

Then one of the guys behind me and gave Giovanni a garrote. "NO, please, don't! Please!" I yelled, "If you want to punish someone, kill me!" 

"Without you, we can't get our guy out, and with this kid dead in a painful way, you will understand how serious we are" Giovanni said.

Giovanni then started choking my child with the garrote. I screamed at Giovanni, begging to let him go. I could see my kid's innocent eyes begging for help, begging for the pain to stop. It was unbearable, to know I'm only 6 feet away from him, and there's nothing i can do. Nothing I can do to stop my child's pain

to be continued

Looking forward to the next scene, I think its a very intresting story so far

thank you

yikes, that is intense.

But didn't you say that they would kill him at midnight?

Sad part of the story? more like freakin depressing. But the story is really good. Cant wait for the next part to be written

 thank you Tony

I came at 8 and I wasn't going to write 4 hours of material

and i couldn't come at 11:30, what kind of father would i be then?

Magnificent story..best ever!! and also many many thanks for writin it with a clear and understandable english mate...really really cant wait for the next episode

thank you

mnirem, you'll understand why he was killed earlier than expected in the next part.

Honestly i can wait b7gangster.

Stands there waiting like a little kid.

Sorry did i say can HUH! trust me i mean can't. the last part was so great