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| 10 days | Started by: b7gangster on Oct 03, '09 13:05 |
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Great work as always b7 :) |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 17, '09 21:05 | |
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The chaos in the story begins tomorrow. |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 17, '09 21:06 | |
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Dang, dude! I can't wait! |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 17, '09 22:26 | |
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Nice work. |
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| Reply by: Kvothe at Oct 17, '09 22:39 | |
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thank you today is the day the first part of the breakout will be told later this day! |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 09:56 | |
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5009, 5008, 5007, 5006, 5005, 5004,............................................................. |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 18, '09 11:21 | |
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I'm very sorry, but, I might not be able to tell anything today. But I will tell something on Monday |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 11:47 | |
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Waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 18, '09 12:28 | |
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Keep em coming, this is great stuff! |
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| Reply by: Synyster at Oct 18, '09 13:39 | |
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I have to wait another day!!!!!! |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 18, '09 13:57 | |
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Day 10 6:55PM Today was the day. We had worked out everything, all the plans, the escapes, everything. We had everything planned. We were going to start at 7pm. We were all sitting in the cafeteria, the place where we would start our escape. We were all eating, waiting for 7pm, when the guards would try to make us leave and go back to the cells. As I ate my sandwich, Enzo said, "I still can't believe this is going to happen, this is my first time breaking out of prison" "Yeah.." I said. "Don't worry, Bryan" Giovanni said, "When we get out, if my boss is still alive, we'll leave you alone, no more trouble" I looked at the clock, "2 minutes till" I said. "Come on clock, just two minutes to go" Peter said. Then he looked at his food. "I hope this won't be my last meal" the Peter said. "I want to live when this is over, even if I have to come back in here" We were all just watching that clock. It was then 7:00pm after awhile. The guards were saying, "Come on, maggets, time to go" "Now?" Enzo and Giovanni asked. "Now" I said. We got up and slowly walked to the doors to the guard. As the guard watched me past, I grabbed him and threw him to the floor, the others did the same. "Stop right there" incoming guards were yelling. I grabbed the guard's gun and started firing at the other guards. They went down hard. The others were doing the same, and we all had guns, all seven of us. We went to the cell area and I yelled, "Everyone on the ground" to the guards and inmates. They obeyed. The guards didn't though, and they fired at us. We ran to open cells and fired back. It was chaos. As we took down guards, we advanced to the door they were coming from. Any time we got close to a fallen guard, we took there gun. It was a war inside that jail. Finally, there were no more guards. "Come on, let's go!" I yelled. Sirens were waling as we stepped outside. Lights appeared on us as we ran. There was still a fence with barbed wire preventing us from leaving, but we weren't going there, we were going to another section of the prison. Where the warden and everything else was. Shots were being fired at us from th watch towers. We fired back, killing some guards. Then I saw it happened. Peter was instantly shot. He went down and I saw blood oozing from his forehead. He was dead. "Peter!" Enzo yelled. Enzo was running back to Peter, but the killer ran up to him and forced him to keep running. Then we all heard a cry of pain. The killer was shot in the back, but he wasn't dead. He was in pain and couldn't move. "We can't turn back for him" Giovanni yelled. "Lock down the prison, do not let them escape!' We heard from guards who were chasing us. We got to the building and busted the door down. "So where we go now?" the cellmate asked as he closed the door. "To the warden?" "no, we have to get to the basement, down there is where everything that runs this place is, the electricity, heating, water, and everything is. That is where everything is so that if something broke down, they knew where to find it" I said. "Well, how does that help us?" the criminal asked. "There's a way to the sewers down there, we can use that to get out of here" I yelled, "Now let's move before more guards come!" We found the door to the basement and continued down as we heard voices approaching. When we were down there, we saw generators, pipes, everything. We ran threw it and found a large pipe that led into the sewers. "This way!" I yelled. We crawled through one at a time as quickly as we could. Giovanni went first, then the criminal, then Enzo, then the cellmate, then me. We were then it a long hall wher water was flowing. "Aww! I think I stepped in shit!" the ciminal Paul said. "We don't have time for this, we still got to advance through here!" I yelled. We were running through that filth. The voices of cops and guards was getting weakewr, then silent. We started walking through there. "Man I can't believe Peter's dead" Enzo said. "Yeah well, we did a dangerous thing and he risked his life" I said. "The last thing he said was that he hoped that dinner wasn't his last meal, now he's dead!" Enzo said. "Well isn't that sad, but I don't care, we left behind our killer and you don't see me crying about it, are you?" Giovanni said. We were silent. Eventually, we found a ladder to the surface, most likely into the city. "Okay, it's time to get out of this shit pipe!" the cellmate said. The cellmate went first and we followed up the ladder. He lifted the manhole up and we climbed through. We noticed that we were in a apartment area and the streets weren't busy, and there were few people around, but they still noticed us in our prison uniforms. A cop came up to us and said, "Hey! You're the guys breaking out of the prison!" I pulled out a gun and shot him in the head, killing him instantly. People panicked and ran everywhere. Lights started going on in the apartments from the shot. "We got to get going!" the criminal said. Then we heard the sirens of police cars coming. to be continued |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 15:49 | |
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Good going b7 cant wait til the next part!!!! |
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| Reply by: Fayth at Oct 18, '09 15:58 | |
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thank you |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 16:01 | |
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The final part of 10 days will be told tomorrow. Don't miss it. |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 16:09 | |
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I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 18, '09 16:15 | |
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got to, sorry |
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| Reply by: b7gangster at Oct 18, '09 16:18 | |
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Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! |
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| Reply by: mnirem at Oct 18, '09 16:21 | |
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i cant wait for the last part |
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| Reply by: ShadowLurker at Oct 18, '09 17:05 | |
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nice story. |
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| Reply by: oReally at Oct 18, '09 17:07 | |
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Nice!!! I can wait, only bacause I'm sure you will make it worth the wait!!! Thanks for putting this great story out here for everyone to enjoy! |
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| Reply by: DonPardo at Oct 18, '09 20:49 | |
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