i like the plot of the story, usually i would be able to figure out the end result but now im lost and feeming for more

Good, that's what i wanted, an ending that's unpredictable. Thank you by the way

 I will try to tell a new part later today if possible

Very good story you should write books

Wow deffinetly should do writing

Cmon you aren't going to tell us anything today???

He should have it on Friday, that is what he said earlier.

Day 5 9:05 AM

I had never been to prison, i always put people in it. Now it's interesting to see where I send them.

Every man in the prison was slowly walking to the cafeteria. The place was silent but for the footsteps of inmates.

"Don't worry, you'll be fine" Enzo said. "I'll watch your back"

I didn't reply, all I noticed was guards staring at me in anger. As we entered the cafeteria, I saw Giovanni, staring at me with rage. Next to him were three people, but one of them stood out. It was him, the criminal i sent to jail. He looked at me without feeling of any kind.

Enzo walked to two people leaning against a wall. "Hey guys, did you get the stuff yet?" he said to them.

"Yeah" one of the guys said, "Just last night" They looked at me, and the other guy said, "Who's your friend, Enzo?"

"His name is Bryan" he said.

They looked at me as I gave a weak smile, but they didn't respond.

"The name's Vincent, and this is my brother, Peter" one guy said. "What are you in for?"

"The cops thought I murdered or helped in murdering two guys" I said.

He looked at his brother, and then he said, "We killed a cop"

"Were you drunk?" I asked. They shook their heads no.

"No, we were selling drugs, he comes by,tried to arrest us, my brother here, Peter, he stabbed him as he tried to held a gun to us"

"He had already called for more of the cops, so we were caught"

I was beginning to worry for my safety around these two.

"Don't worry, Bryan, they won't do anything to you, these guys are some of my buddies in here" Enzo said.

"Yeah, that's..uh..." That's all I said, before something grabbed the back of my head and hit it against the wall. I fell to the floor with blood coming from my forehead.

I saw Giovanni over me. He said, "I see you met Enzo's buddies, how about you meet mine" he started to smile.

I could see that Enzo and the others were beginning to back away.

"You already know my boss, his name is Paul, and that's his cellmate, and that's my friend from the gang, we don't care much about there names" he said. Then he held me against the wall. guards were beginning to come.

"Just know this, as soon as I get the chance, I will kill you, and I will make sure that it's painful for you"

to be continued

Still epic!

Really got me wondering whats next everytime...Really good buddy :)

I can't ell what is going to happen. "Usually I know a few chapters in, but dangs, so much suspense!

thanks

Tomorrow, I will not tell another part. I will be busy tomorrow, way too busy to tell you anything. However, I will give you people as many parts of the story as I can on Friday

NOOOOOOOOO!!!  Can't wait til Friday!

Great read... Who needs real literature 

Hey, are you saying that this isn't real literature?!

Day 5 12:00

The guards had to stop the "fight" that was going on in the cafeteria. They had to pull back Giovanni's guys away from me. Luckily, they didn't kill me right then and there. What did they have to lose?

I was in my cell, just remembering his words. He was going to kill me, I didn't know when, but he was going to kill me.

I was just sitting around when Enzo walked in. He said, "Is everything alright?"

"Well, after you abandoned me..." I said.

"Hey! I'm sorry, but their group is too big for me and my two guys to handle" he said, "I hope you understand"

I sighed. "Yeah, whatever" I said. He looked at me disapprovingly. We were silent for awhile, I could see Enzo trying to think of something to say.

"Yeah...um...I'm going to go...gotta meet my boys" he said. He walked out of my cell.

I sighed, and I walked out too. As I got out, I leaned on the rail. My cell was on the second floor, so I looked over everyone. Then I realized there were no guards around.

Then as I looked to my left, I saw Giovanni's friend with a knife in his hand! He swung but I dodged. I could see his face, it was determined. He took another swing, but I grabbed his arm and held tight. He struggled to get out of my hand.

"Where the hell did you get the knife!?" I asked loudly.

He didn't answer. We got loose of grip and tried to kill me again. But I dodged and punched him on his face. He stumbled back, and over the railing. The sound he made was just a cry of surprise. It only took a second till he hit the ground. When he hit the ground, all I heard was a loud cry of horrible pain, then silence.I looked down and blood was making a pool around him. He had landed on the knife.

People were crowding around the body and looking up, but I was already gone. I had quickly ran past people's view and downstairs. No one had noticed me. Guards were entering. One yelled, "Who did this!?" The guards were angry.

I knew now, I needed to do something. I needed to get away from all this if I wanted to survive. I needed...to break out of prison.

to be continued

If you people really liked this part, I might tell another part.

Great read, enjoyed it. 

thanks